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Old 07-19-2007, 12:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Fallon Mondello is a bright, beautiful witch. She and Harry Potter were very much in love, and had been since their third year at Hogwarts. She had also become great friends with Ron and Hermione, no longer making them a trio. Many students at Hogwarts told her that Draco Malfoy was in love with her, and he was planning something drastic, but she was too caught up in Harry to even care.
So finally the Final Battle comes on Fallon’s 21st birthday, even though she was eight months pregnant with Harry’s child, Fallon was next to Harry, ready to fight. But while she was dueling a Death Eater, someone covered her mouth and apparated her away. The last thing she remembered was Harry running towards her screaming, “LET HER GO! SHE’S MINE!”
A couple of days later, Fallon wakes to find that she is in the Malfoy Manor. Draco had kidnapped her. He really did plan to do something drastic. Fallon is trapped and there is no way for her to leave the Manor.
While Fallon is at the Manor, Harry, Ron and Hermione are hard at work at the Burrow, divising a plan to get Fallon back. Harry defeated Voldemort in the war, and therefore it killed all those people loyal to the Dark Lord. So the only person who stands in his way is Draco.
But in the end, will Fallon fall in love with Draco? Or will she stay in love with Harry in hopes that one day he will come and save her? Its’ all up to you.

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WOW, sounds exciting!!!!!

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Lol its up...!! I'll take my rightful place please...!!
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could i be made up? or aren't you going to have made up people?
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wow thanx everyone! And I'm sorry, but we aren't doing made ups. Thanks anyways! Woot! We can start! Give me a minute and we will all start, ok?
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Fallon sat up in the bed and looked around. Draco had stuffed her in some random room of his house. She was already tired of being there. It wasn't healthy for her or her baby. She looked down at her stomach and rubbed it, holding back tears. She missed Harry so much. He took care of her and treated her so well: He took her to the doctor when needed, he helped her get ready, he always cooked her good food and bought her anything she wanted or needed. Draco, on the other hand, just stashed her in this empty room.
"LET ME OUT OF HERE, DRACO! I WANT TO GO HOME!," Fallon yelled, beginning to cry. She had never missed someone so much in her life. What if she went into labor? Harry wouldn't be there to hold her hand. Draco would probably not even get her a nurse to help deliver. "PLEASE LET ME OUT, DRACO! PLEASE!"
Fallon banged her fists down on the matress. She walked over to the door, but it wouldn't budge. She ran over to the window and busted it open, but as soon as it shattered, it was back in one piece. "I'M NEVER GOING TO GET OUT OF HERE!"
All of the sudden, Fallon's baby began to kick. It hurt worse and worse now, seeing as she was getting so close to her due date. She plopped down on the bed, crying and clutching her stomach.
"PLEASE DRACO!"
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Ron yawned waking up to his alarm clock. "Urggg." he groaned pulling his pillow over his head. After what he thought was a half hour, Ron looked up at his clock. "11:30!!!!!!!" He exclaimed so loud it probably woke the neighbors. "I have to go see Harry!" he jumped out of bed and was in such a rush, that he nearly burned his toast to a crisp with his wand. "Oh I'm hungry, I don't give a da-" Ron was interrupted by the phone. "Yes mum, I know. I really have to get going no bye." he hung up the phone shaking his head. "Okay ready to go." Ron said opening the front door.

"You've got to be kidding me!!" He ran back in his apartment. "How could I have forgotten my pants again!!" This time Ron was really ready and he left his house with a huff.

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Draco stopped the house elf; who was, as he had, ordered taking food to Fallon. "I'll get this to her.." Draco said coldly as he took the tray from the tiny creature. "Fix her some fresh dress robes..." Draco ordered before turning away.

Draco walked over to the room. Breathing in deeply he composed himself for the act once again. He opened the door and walked in to see the beautiful witch, he hasd fallen for. He was sure he could lose himself in those blue eyes, which immediately shot up and Draco could see they were gleaming with tears. Yet Draco showed no sympathy.

Draco closed the door firmly behind him. "I have been told..you are'nt eating!" Draco said looking directly in her eyes; his face yet again emotionless but his insides screaming to tell her that he didnt wanted to hurt her, but the coldness in his eyes never leaving him.


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OOC: Since the battle is just over, they'd probably not have time to get married...let's say they're dating...very seriously. It doesn't really matter to me, so if you think otherwise, we can do that.

IC: The morning sun breaking through the window wakened Hermione, who was sleeping at the Burrow. Opening her eyes slowly and yawning wide, she slowly sat up in her bed. Her brain took a few moments to register what had happened the day before, and when she recalled the incident, her mouth felt suddenly dry.

It pained her to think about it, but as she hastily dressed, it was all that could consume her mind.

Without so much as a brief glance at the mirror, she headed out her bedroom door and down to the kitchen. Ron would be arriving soon, after all. And when he, Harry, and she were together, they would be able to devise some sort of plan to rescue Fallon.
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Ron burst through Hermione's door. "Morning Hermione." he said softly to her and kissed her forehead gently. "How are you doing?" Ron held her close knowing how Hermione and Fallon were such good friends. "We'll get her back. You have nothing to worry about." he tried to comfort her but the truth was, he himself was worried sick! "So I take it Harry's not here?" Ron looked around and there was no sight of Harry.
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Harry woke up with a start. It felt like he'd only just fallen asleep. He hasn't been able to sleep at all. Tossing and turning, sleeping wildy. He had to move everything away from the bed to keep from hurting himself. Looking at the clock, wincing his eyes, he noticed the time was past 11. Oh no, past 11 already ,I was suppose to meet with HErmione and Ron earlier! he thought to himself angrily. Getting up, he quickly put on some cloths, and stashed his wand in his pants. Going downstairs, he looked at the toaster, then the stove. No... no food for me today. I've got to get her back... he thought to himself as he quickly put on his jacket and went outside.

He only lived a few houses down from Hermione luckily, so it didn't take much time for his efforts of half walking half running. Without bothering to knock on the door, Harry walked in, took on his shoes and coat, and walked over to where he heard Ron and Hermione. "Hey guys, sorry i'm late, I didn't get any sleep at all last night." he said scratching his head and taking a yawn.
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ooc: Ron and Hermione can date if thats what yall want! It doesn't matter to me at all...

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Fallon looked up at Draco, just as much a hard cold expression on her face as on his. "You're right. I haven't been eating. I don't understand this! If you really loved me, why are you treating me like this!?? This isn't about me anymore. I don't care about myself. I care about my baby!," Fallon said, unconsiously rubbing her stomach. She was going to have a baby girl, and all she cared about now was that the baby would be safe and healthy.
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"If you really care about the damn baby, then you'd eat.." Draco said through gritted teeth. Draco slowly got up. "A healer will soon be here to check on you." Draco said slowly his back on her.
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"You idiot! If you send a healer, they will know that you kidnapped me, and it'll land you in Azkaban! Not like thats a bad thing...," Fallon yelled. She stood up and forcefully made Draco turn to face her. Her face was inches from his. "YOU FACE ME WHEN I'M TALKING TO YOU," Fallon growled, putting her pointer finger in Draco's face.
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"When I planned to get you here I knew about your condition..and I have my sources.." Draco said sternly as Fallon turned him to face her. "And I'll talk to you however I like.. SO GET USED TO IT!" Draco said shouting the the last sentence. Draco slightly pushed her away from him.
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"DON'T YOU DARE TALK TO ME LIKE THAT! I FIGURED YOU'D HAVE ENOUGH GUTS TO AUCTALLY TREAT THE WOMAN YOU LOVE WITH RESPECT! BUT I WAS WRONG! I HOPE WHEN HARRY COMES AND FINDS ME, HE KILLS YOU DEAD, JUST LIKE HE KILLED YOUR FATHER!," Fallon screamed, really getting mad that Draco was talking to her like that. When he pushed her, She flung her arm back and punched him in the face. "DON'T YOU DARE LAY YOUR HANDS ON ME, OR I'LL KILL YOU MYSELF!"
Fallon was out of breath and felt extremely dizzy. Her Italian temper was kicking in with full force. She thought back to when Harry used to laugh at her when she got mad, and it made her even more mad. But then he'd take her in his arms and kiss her, making everything all right. It even made her forget what she was mad about...
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"Good morning, Ron." Hermione hugged Ron tight, not wanting to let go. She just wanted to forget everything had happened because it caused her so much grief, but she knew she couldn't. Fallon's life was at stake here.

When Harry had come in, Hermione gave him a weak smile. "Hey, Harry." Turning to both him and Ron, she suggested, "Let's go to the living room, shall we?"

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Draco spit some blood out of his mouth,his anger rising. Draco suddenly pushed Fallon against the wall,holding her wrists firmly above her head. He glared at her. They were too close now. "I loved you so much... " Draco whispered furiously to her. "But you rejected me for that Potter.." Draco saidhisvoice slow,his voice was'nt filled with anger now but with hurt. Draco had told himself not to get his emotions out but she pushed him over the edge...
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Fallon began to cry hard again. She couldn't help it. She could tell Draco was hurt that she was with Harry. But she loved Harry so much! They both had so much in common: They were both only children with their parents dead. Not being able to take anymore, Fallon ringed her wrists out of Draco's grip and hugged him close. This was all so emotional for her, she didn't care if she was hugging Voldemort himself. She needed some kind of comfort. Fallon cried on Draco's shoulder. Plus to make matters worse, pregnant women had horrible mood swings. So Fallon cried over almost everything lately.
"I'm so sorry...," she sobbed over and over again, still holding Draco close.

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Draco was slightly taken aback. He has thougfht she's kich or punch him again but she instead hugged him. Draco didnt knew what to do at frist but taking the courage he wrapped his hands around him. Stroking her hair he lead her to the bed.
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"Please don't let go. I can't stand to be alone any longer," Fallon whispered, still holding Draco tight and crying.
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Draco smiledstill holding her.It was like being in a dream.How he always dreamt of holding Fallon like this. Hehadwaited for solong for her. I love you so much.." Draco thought to himself.

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As usual, Fallon's mood swings we're kicking into full gear. She got out of Draco's grasp and stood up and walked over to the window. She crossed her arms and gritted her teeth.
"Are you ever going to let me go?," she asked, once again holding her stomach.


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