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Mr. Black the Poet - Sa16+ I hope you'll all like my work of art! " Foul smelling Snape" Snivellus oh snivellus You foul smelling roach The evil that you’ve caused I should have cut your throat You lie like a snake Coiled in the grass You think you are the best one yet Death Eaters never last Lord Voldemort is furious The boy slipped his grasp Now dear sweet Harry Is safe from him at last And you have failed your duty What shall he think of you Snivellus oh snivellus Who works for you-know-who |
any replies? no? well the next one is funny "The wart of doom" Voldemort Now has a wart Growing on his face Alas it's huge And frightening too Almost as big as space He used his wand to pop it And blew off his evil face Voldemort is long time dead And now Im dancing..Yay!! |
no replies? why dont I just post them, and you reply when you can? "loopy luna" loopy loony luna you have to love her style evanna lynch plays her well her earrings drive me wild the rotfang conspracy? it makes you want to laugh till you cry your eyes out she is longbottoms half I look forward to seeing her in the phoenix movie her good ol looks and love of books she does look kind of groovy!! |
and another one!!!! 'Voldemort" voldemort oh voldemort you tore our world apart your evil eyes tell me well that you have no heart you go off killing muggles with a look of purest joy the death eaters you have betrayed and now draco malfoy but now your life draws to an end and I shall wish you luck for here comes harry potter he's after your horcrux!! |
and of couse another( and I think I will want a few replies before I continue) " the romance" Some call it love, some call it lust I honestly dont know But I love you harry From your head down to your toes Your thirst to be the hero Your personality Has sweet good ole ginny Falling to my knees I loved you from your very first year you once had saved my life and I will pay the dept back soon through sorrowness and strife and if I die besides you will you be holding my hand with a loving heart we are two parts that never fail to stand |
there really good, keep it up bro! |
thanks sis. any more comments? well like I said, I post, you read, you comment when you want!!! "potions and spells" Avada kedavra the killing curse so cruel wingardium leviosa the levitation tool sectumsempra with its slashes and blood harry used it on malfoy If only I could!!! the famous spell stupify will stun you by surprise veritaserum will make you tell no lies the polyjuice potion will change your looks at will the wolfsbane potion helps lupin quickly deal with his werewolf problem he causes wreck without the silencio spell shuts them up whenever they pout the evil crucio makes people obey you this spell is used by many including you-know-who I can think of many more but it would take all night but one little tiny tip just use these in a fight!!!! |
" beyond the veil" beyond the veil beyond the grave dumbledore now lies because of voldy's evilness his hatred and despise farewell dear old albus I pay you my tribute to never hear you speak his name your voice will never mute we will remember your greatness in this world teaching to the hearts of hogwarts boys and girls to know that you wont be around really is a bother but I'll always think of you your favorite, harry potter |
and yet another!!!! "The mirrior of Erised" I looked into the mirrior saw what I did desire but voldemort he knew me well and set the exit on fire Alas!! I could not run or hide thank god we didnt duel as he said " give me the stone" I fought with evil quirrel but I discovered I had strenght I never had before and layed my hands upon them there face broke out in sores I thought that I was loosing It I thought that I was gone untill I heard that familiar voice and knew that it was done the stone had been destroyed and he grew weak again and thats when she started loving me ron's little sister Gin |
*claps* really good! |
Your writing style is really good - but keep in mind that not all good poems have to rhyme! |
I like them. I agree, not everything has to rhyme. Keep up the great work |
oooooh , i really like ur poems they're really awesome !! good effort , keep it up ^_^ |
Ooh. Keep up the great work! I really like your poetry. |
Oh wow those are really good! I can't wait to read more, plus I like your name :paw1: |
really really good! |
GOOD JOB DUDE!!!!! I really like the first 1 but overall I like them all.. You need to be worshiped! lol PAMS! :worship: |
you are really good! I love your first one. sooo funny lol. |
Last poem 6/3/07 |
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