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Laieesha's HP heartbreak poems - Sa9+ I've decided to just open a new thread and copy my HP poems as opposed to editing the old thread. I hope my "loyal" readers will find me... ;) lol Remember, my poems are about Heartbreak, so they will have sad tones. But sometimes, I do write random non-heartbreak stuff. Anyway, to start of, here's one about my fave ship... (thanks to Potterpuffs for the idea!) ****************** Finally The first time I saw you Was at the train station My heart was flooded With all kinds of emotion. I found you attractive Indeed very good-looking. Later, I would learn You'd be my life's meaning. First, you saved my life On our first year together. But did you do it for our school? Or even, for my brother? You treated me like a sister But I saw you as my hero. I've loved you secretly It hurt that you didn't know. I turned to others and tried To fill this empty space. I wanted to feel loved But what I wanted was your embrace. I sat and I watched you goggle Over a girl who didn't deserve you. I sat and I watched you get hurt So now, will you see me too? Over the course of some tragic events My feelings for you got stronger. I thought I'd keep on hiding it But I couldn't fight it any longer. I wanted to grab you and kiss you And just say what I want to say That after all these years with you My childhood crush never really went away. But you grabbed me, and you kissed me And my heart overflowed with joy. Finally you realized I was here all along Now I know I'm madly in love with this boy. My waiting and patience has paid off I love you and I know you love me. Now that you're here by my side I'm happy as I'll ever be... http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/5807/hg046xc.gif ****************** I will add more as soon as this thread gets approved... but for now, :hello: |
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OOh, and Lai I found a solution for the non Hp ones.... If you ever do get in one of your "moods" and write some post them in your User Notes;) Please and Thank you! Can't wait for new ones! :worship: Lots of Luff XD ~~RQT |
Hey y'alls.. here's a Cho/Ced poem!! This just came to me... ***************** Always In My Heart Fighting back the tears Thinking about all the years That you haven't been by my side Countless were the nights I cried. All this time I've been depressed I couldn't eat or sleep or rest I want to move on, I want a fresh start But your smile is haunting my lonely heart. I think of you every night and day I still remember when you looked my way. Between us was an instant attraction To me, you made a great first impression. Your eyes twinkling and your smile charming I couldn't resist, you were so appealing. I fell in love when you waved and said hi, I looked at you and smiled, all shy. When you asked me to the ball I felt like the luckiest girl of them all. In different houses we may be, But that didn't stop you from noticing me. Here I go again, staring at your photo I never ever dreamed of seeing you go. You being strong, and smart, and true Is why I fell deeply in love with you. I hope you're watching me from up above Because I don't know how to let go of our love. As I mourn the loss of this boy who was brave, I drop this flower, and my tears, on this grave... |
ok... just moving my R/Hr poem from the old thread to here.... ******************* So Close, And Yet So Far Six years I've known you Six years you've been there But why is it so hard To tell you how much I care? First year together was bad All we did was bicker and fight But in the end, with Harry I saw you in a different light. Once, when I heard you get insulted I was there to defend, and I endured Disgusting effect of a spell that backfired And you were there til I was cured. I think of you as a great friend My true feelings for you I deny. That is why I was overly jealous when You went to the ball with another guy. I wished it was me with you there So I sulked and didn't have fun. That was when I finally realized For me, you were the one. It hurt to think of you with him The thought of you kissing another. My heart was crushed, and I was lonely So I turned to Lavender. But soon, I knew she wasn't enough It was you who I really wanted. I know it, and you know it, Why did I take you for granted? At night, I look up at the sky And I wish upon a star. That I get to be with the girl I love Who's close, but yet so far... |
here's my Lupin/Tonks poem.... ******************** I Don't Care We used to always be together, We used to hang out and be silly. I used to see you as a dear friend, And you too felt the same for me. I thought we'd always be this way, But something inside me has changed. I felt something stir deep inside This new feeling I had was strange. I tried to dismiss whatever it was Thinking if I did, it would go away. The more I fought this new feeling The more it decided to stay. I sort of didn't want to think That for you, I was falling. But I couldn't keep it to myself To you I revealed this feeling. But you said it wouldn't work out You said it just cannot be. So you pretended I said nothing You stayed away from me. I was hurt and it showed My patronus took a new form. Others also took notice They knew it wasn't the norm. Until one day I broke down I screamed that I loved you. I said I didn't care what you were A promise of a love that's true. You said I'm not safe with you You're only thinking for my own sake Tears filled my eyes and I told you That it's a risk I'm willing to take. |
here's a Victor/Hermione one... ****************** You Don't Belong To Me I'm the youngest to play Pro Quidditch But my heart was stolen by a young witch. She is great, she is smart, and very sweet I waited for the day we'd officially meet. See, I was invited for an event at her school I accepted thinking, this event I'd rule I walked in there, all sure and proud Then I noticed her in the crowd. Although I was surrounded by many girls I noticed her, with her books and her curls. I was always hanging around the library I know she'll bump into me eventually. But I just couldn't wait any longer So I decided to just go up to her. I let out my feelings once and for all I asked her to go with me to the ball. She looked at me, somewhat hesitating She wasn't sure because she was waiting. She was waiting for another to ask her out But it seemed she was still having doubts. So finally she agreed to go with me At the Yule Ball, she walked in gracefully. She was the most beautiful girl there I couldn't have picked anyone better. Yet I noticed she was still distracted By someone whose hair glowed fiery red. In her eyes, I saw her longing For that someone she can't help loving. The term ended, how I wished I could stay I asked her to write me everyday. She promised to keep in touch, an owl she would send And she said she liked me, but only as a friend. I wish things will turn out just fine. I wish she will love me, and be mine. But even if I use many potions and spells I know she's in love with somebody else. |
here's one about one of the first ships on the book.. my very own James/Lily poem... ***************** Pretty Brown Eyes There he goes again, with his pretty brown eyes Looking at me lovingly, thinking up his lies. I try to ignore him, and I go a different way He's annoying, but somehow his smile makes my day. He's been trying to get me to notice him He's so obnoxious, his chances are slim. He always hangs around his creepy little friends Most of his time, with those three, he spends. He thinks he's so cool, playing with the snitch Always getting in trouble with poor old Mr. Filch. He's just not someone I'd be proud to call 'mine' But between love and hate, there is a fine line. I saw him less as an annoyance, more of a good guy I saw it when I looked into those pretty brown eyes. Down by the lake, we spent most of our time I fell in love with him, he's perfect and so fine. The days and years pass, and our love grew stronger Until one day, he asked to be together forever. I married this fine man, and he's been good to me We were in love and happy as we'll ever be. We were blessed with a son, we called him Harry He was a beautiful baby, strong like daddy. Little did we know, our happiness will be cut short By someone who thought killing was a sport. As the night sky was filled with ominous green light I was too late and saw James, my love, in a fight. For that split second, he looked my way "I love you, and Harry too", he seemed to say. I looked at my love, I was scared for him He wanted to reassure me, as things go dim. He wanted to say everything will be alright But it was too late, he'd lost the fight. How could I protect the men of my life? I was Harry's mother, but also James' wife. There he goes again, with his pretty brown eyes He closed them as I cried for the very last time... |
this one is for my loyal stalker and her dedication to her Siry... my Siry/Tina poem... ^_^ ********************* A Sad Farewell You used to be mean and cruel, You felt superior to everyone else. You were always bored in school So to others, you performed spells. You were careless and arrogant You led people to believe That everything will be better The moment that you leave. In the beginning, I didn't like you But that was a long time ago. You have turned into a fine man Far from the boy I used to know. You changed for the better, You were dependable and loving. You were loyal and honest, My heart you were slowly stealing. You didn't know I cared for you I loved you from a distance. You were oblivious to those around I didn't even get my chance. I should've told you I loved you Now I'm afraid I'm too late. I should've held you in my arms Before you met your sad fate. I hope you can hear me now I'll tell you this before I cry. I love you, Mr. Sirius Black Let this be my final goodbye... |
ok, I promise this is the last one for tonight... This one is not a ship, but it's about my obsession *cougholiverphelpscough*... It's an acrostic, so if you read the first letter of every line (except for the last line... sorry) ************ I really don’t know just how I can Love someone, from afar, like this man. One day, I’m wishing that you would be Veering your attention towards me. Every night I dream of you On my side, with you loving me too. Loneliness deep inside my heart Is eminent knowing we’re so far apart. Various feelings I need to sort out Everytime I think, I just want to shout! Read my thoughts, feel my heart Please tell me where to start. How can I let my feelings go? Each thought of you haunts me so. Love me, please, love me dear Please know that I am always here. Someday, I wish you could see Just how much you mean to me… |
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I'm glad you didn't give up on posting some of your poems on SS Lai. It would've been too much to bear...I've already gotten four pms from others saying that they're leaving SS because of the deletion of their poem thread.... **Sniffs** It's so not fair.... ANyhoo, At least I still have you! **Stays clinged Forever** ~~RQT XD |
did u see my new one Tina?? the one about Cho/Ced?? (see post #3)... that's my latest one right now... I don't know which ship I'll do next, but I have an idea... :shifty: |
Gosh they are awesome!!! Cool!!! :woot: :woot: :woot: Keep on posting!!! :woot: :woot: :woot: |
oh wow... a new reader???? thanks for stopping by patronus_ravenclaw! i try to update as quickly as i can, but can never find the time to do it... but maybe another one next week?? i have a character in mind to be the "speaker" of my next poem... |
*gasp* I love your poems! Just read them all now, being myself an avid poetry writer, and I have to say your writing skill is awesome =] My faves are the Cho/Cedric, Ron/Hermione and James/Lily, though I bet that if I skim through the others one more time, I'll like them as much. Keep posting, I'll be here to pass well-deserved galantry ^_^ Chris |
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A new poem? New speaker? **Wonders** You know this kind of stuff kills me, Then again I love suspense, but who? Maybe Filch? :lol: WHo knows? Keep them coming and remembering your poems will always leave us to want more! :yes: :worship: Lots of Luff, ~~RQT XD |
OMG!! i dunno which poem to comment first:confused.mode: lol!! all of them are soo touching, soo beautiful*thumps chest*! i love 'Finally' but not the ship[peace to all h/g shippers]...i still love 'So Close, And Yet So Far'[r/hr!!!:woot:]lol... the others are lovely too!!:bow: "ILoveOliverPhelps", *thumps chest* Keep it up Ate Lai!!! you rOCK! \m/:glomp: |
hi! New reader here, just read them all, and truthfully im awed, your so good! Really really good, compare to mine, you're far better. I love your poems about ron and hermione and v/hr. No, actually i love them all... I didn't know you write poems, until now. Post more soon. I'd surely like to read them. |
Hi Laieesha.. I'm a new reader and i think they are great poems indeed!!! I love all of them!!! Keep up the excellent work!!! |
**Juggles to Keep all the new readers entertained before they leave** :erm: ((**Cough** No one knows I can't even juggle **Cough**)) Anyhoo, We're all waiting Lai, I'm really anxious to see who your speaker in the next poem will be...It's killing me.... :no: **Stalks and worships** :run: :bow: ~~RQT XD |
:woot: an update an update!! Sorry took so long... Like I told Tina, I sort of got sidetracked... Also, I was going to do something else. But it seemed kinda shallow. So I decided to do one about someone else instead... Here's another R/Hr one, only this time, it's Hermione's turn to speak... (I wasn't very satisfied with this one though...) :( Oh, and Tina, I know I said it would probably be short, but you know me.. I couldn't resist! ^_^ *********************** Somehow... You've been my friend, I've been yours Being with you was all that mattered. But somehow, as if by strange force, All my dreams for us were shattered. I feel like somehow I'm to blame Within arms length, I kept you near. My heart is screaming out your name But somehow, you did not, could not, hear. You have always been there for me To me you are more than just a friend. If you felt the same, somehow I didn't see Confusing signals you would always send. In our fourth year, I waited and waited For you to ask me to the Yule Ball. Until someone else asked and I debated If not with you, should I go at all? I tried to keep my mind off of you. I went with Viktor and with him I stayed. Somehow I caught you glancing my way too. You were there, looking hurt and betrayed. In our sixth year, sometime in December I found out something I didn't want to know, You liked her, you kissed her, and I remember Mixed emotions as I cast, "Oppugno!" This is not how I wanted it to be I thought I was supposed to be smart? I couldn't believe you'd do that to me! I never thought you'd break my poor heart. I feel the warmth of tears from my eyes. How long will you make me wait? How long until you finally realize? Tell me you love me, before it's too late... *********************** Not my best... whacha guys think?? |
by the way (sorry for double posting), I just wanted to say thanks thanks and more thanks to all my new readers!!! Glad you all like my work.. ^_^ Quote:
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and last but not least... my luverlee stalker, (who's still clinging to me, by the way), my most loyal reader! Thanks for always checking here, and nudging me to write a new one. Quote:
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Even if you haven't wrote the other poem Lai, I still want to know who the speaker was....I've been literally dying with curiosity! :yes: Quote:
How about a poem for Fred/George...? I'm sure they "fell" in the pit before and jokes are their way out? A thought, you can do whatever...:yes: Anyhoo, I loved it like usual :P Keep them coming, Lots of Luff, ~~RQT XD Quote:
**Flees before it's too late** I shall be back :glomp: |
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Lai...not been here recently, but I was nudged by a certain persistent and awesome friend. I loved it, though I think Hermione is more bitter than that and I think she would have been harsher on Ron, but you never can tell with love. neways....luv ya. |
wow... all these responses... *feels special* :blush: first and foremost, thank you all for passing by and reading my latest shipper poem... Quote:
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By the way Tina, check you-know-where for my OTHER new poem. The one I said I got sidetracked with. You know where it is, since you were the one who suggested I put it there... :D Quote:
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Again, love on all of you!!! *glomps everyone before leaving* |
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