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Hera 03-04-2004 11:14 AM

Emily's poetry
 
Hi, and thank you for coming!
These are some of my poetry.
There not that good but I enjoy writing them never the less.
So I hope you'll understand. :rose:

Sirius Black: the story

Once upon a mournful night,
the friends of four became the three,
ones fate was gone,
the other to flee,
one was left confused but spared,
another cast to sea,
it was to Azkaban he went,
he was both brave and true.

A boy was cast a shadow,
no parents had he,
the one who spoilt his dear life,
was a git a man-
called Pettigrew.

No one understood this act,
of cowerdess and plea,
but Voldermort has risen,
his powers back and all,
but we know this already that he is fated to fall.

The years went by or so it was told,
an army was formed.
Both hairy and bold,
they faught to save our lives.

Though the war has barely started,
one of our loved ones have now departed.
Sirius Black, our hero.


I hope you liked it- I'll post some more ASAP

Hera 03-04-2004 11:25 AM

In the night

Somethings in the shadows,
somethings in the night,
nothings really there,
its just a little fright.

Crawling by the fire,
with an eerie stare,
I just curl up frightened,
thinking its not there.

A gusty breeze comes rushing past,
with a little chill,
now I know theres something there,
standing very still.

A flicker of a tail,
a creature with black fur,
I dont think its scary,
all it says is "pur".

Hera 03-04-2004 11:30 AM

Last one for tonight :rose:

Deadends!

Everywhere I turn today,
everything I try,
nothing ever goes my way,
it makes me want to cry.

Each and every way I look,
it always seems so dark,
every time I pass a dog,
it almost always barcks.

The only thing I'm looking for,
is somewhere I can hide,
somewhere very far away,
where no one ever pries.

But as I go along my way,
the only thing I find,
at the end of every road,
a brocken down old sign.

Deadends!


what do you think?

Hera 03-05-2004 09:50 AM

I hope I get some responces soon :(

Forbidden love

A love so strong,
a love so deep,
its like a dagger,
your blood it seeps.

You love him so,
he loves you to,
but in the end,
it wont feel true.

No matter what you think of him,
the facts will stay the same,
no forbidden love can last,
its just an evil game.

Hera 03-06-2004 03:36 AM

Idependence

You can do it on your own,
if you give yourself the chance,
just close your eyes,
and go for it,
your life it can inhance.

Get a pen and paper,
note the words you seek,
every sentance that you write,
is more than you will speak.

You can do it if you want to,
just dont give up the chance,
like I said before,
your life it can inhance.

Now go and try your new found love,
but dont forget these words,
listen to youself not others,
dont think that your a nerd.


does anyone read these?

Vanessa 03-06-2004 06:03 AM

This is great, I love dead ends, forbidden love and independence.
Keep at it and dont worry others will read it too. :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose:

ravens_girl 03-06-2004 06:34 AM

we'll support you :flowersmile:

Hera 03-15-2004 09:56 AM

You and what army? :unsure:
:rose: thanks anyway guys but face it no one likes my stuff.

Love

Love is like a lump of gold,
Its hard to keep and hard to hold,
Of all the guy's I've ever met,
your the one I wont forget.
I do beleive that god above,
has created you for me to love.
He picked you from all the rest,
that's why I love you the best.


- dedicated to my boyfriend Michael McNeil
I love you honey
:wub:

susie 03-19-2004 12:59 AM

Hey Emily- I really like your poems! :hello:

Hera 03-20-2004 06:23 AM

thanks susie :flowersmile:

One for two

Kiss of life,
kiss of death,
tell me wich one you thinks best.

First kiss me,
then kiss her,
now tell us wich one you prefer.

Either one of us will do,
just keep your bold,
intensions true.

now close your eyes and count to ten,
cause either way we'll still be friends.

Hera 03-30-2004 09:01 AM

Does anyone read these????!!!

Demon within.

In each and every one of us,
a Demon has been born,
to sacrifice both good and evil,
our lives which will be torn.

Life or death,
do you choose?,
against the wish of god,
even if we dare to win,
our backs would get a prod.

The demon within,
cannot be slayed,
though fortunes and wonders,
towards us will wade.

Vanessa 03-31-2004 10:46 AM

this is great and I urge people to reda it so dont give up I'm still here!

Hera 04-03-2004 06:56 AM

CAUTION: I have waited and waited but noones been reading my poetry. If business doesn't pick up I'll be forced to consider closing this topic. Please anyone if you have read my poems please post you comment good or bad it wont matter but if I'm wasting my time when noone reads my stuff thats what hurts the most.
Emily xxx

ashley1325 04-03-2004 06:58 AM

i like it

Meandering 04-03-2004 01:36 PM

You moron! Don't you DARE stop, it's all really good. Don't get discouraged.

Hera 04-04-2004 04:16 AM

:rose: thank you so much you have no idea how grateful I'am.
I'll keep writing.. and thank you again!

firelily 04-13-2004 12:00 AM

:hello: hi my name is leah and i just started writing my poems on here to. that last poem of your made me lol please dont stop writing i love them my favs are love and messing around thank you for reading my poems im firelily please keep writes

leah mae your new fan


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