Eclipses poem(s)
 

Okay, seeing as I'm here, I figured I might as well post up some of my poems to share with the rest of the world BE WARNED: I am not a poet. I dont right meaningful poems. The best I can do is rhyme.

Ghost
High on a hill,
in a small haunted house,
there lived a small ghost, as big as a mouse.

He lived all alone,
not a person in sight,
the poor ghost was lonely -scared of the night.

Once He'd been happy,
once he'd been glad. . .
but then came along, THE NAUGHTY BIG BAD!

The Naughty Big Bad was scary and mean,
it scared away the cat, the mouse and the queen. . .

I forgot the rest of it, and my brain cant seem to make up anything more. . . (I never claimed to be smart!)

that's interesting - i really like your rhyming, and its a great story, its just missing something - you know it's a little short, so definitely work on it, but keep up the rhyming!