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Maxilocks 11-11-2009 04:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Jennn (Post 8809586)
Maybe I should start chanting more, more, more!!

More updates? Or more Draco-HAS-to-save-Ginny? =p
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Originally Posted by Jooooolz8809593
The Temple of Regelia? Hmmm, not a god or goddess I recognise, interesting.

Yes. To be totally honest, I invented that name on the spot. =p
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Excellent insight into his character. I love your style!
Thanks a heap, hunny.
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Chilling! That literally gave me goosebumps!
Me no like goosebumps. =[ Okay fine, maybe I do, that's why I had this HUGE collection of scary stories - until acquaintances borrowed [and never returned] most of it. =[ But, point is... have a cookie. It's Neville-flavoured. =DD
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Big chunky quotes I know, but it's amazing. I luff luff luff luff it! Brilliant!
*super mega blush* Thank you!


HannahLongbottom 11-11-2009 04:56 PM

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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie (Post 8809610)
Yes. To be totally honest, I invented that name on the spot. =p

Ah! That's why there was nothing when I googled it! I am imagining a sort of evil Pre-Raphealite beauty who is demanding the sacrifice of magical people.

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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie (Post 8809610)
Thanks a heap, hunny.

You're welcome a heap :D

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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie (Post 8809610)
Me no like goosebumps. =[ Okay fine, maybe I do, that's why I had this HUGE collection of scary stories - until acquaintances borrowed [and never returned] most of it. =[ But, point is... have a cookie. It's Neville-flavoured. =DD

Neville flavoured cookies? Yum!:xd:

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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie (Post 8809610)
*super mega blush* Thank you!


:glomp: bless, you're too sweet!

harita 11-11-2009 05:19 PM

awesome Maixe....waiting for more and more...

WhittyBitty 11-11-2009 05:38 PM

Maxie, I told you I'd read so I figured I should comment to say that I was reading. :xd:

Plus I wanted to talk to you. :lol: Yes, I am that lame.

Vampire_BaD_GiRl 11-11-2009 06:44 PM

New Chapter!! :woot:
And an exiting one =D

I knew Draco would save Ginny after all. They're just so cute here. :glomp:
And Draco's sooo romantic when he's all defensive over Ginny :loved:
I just ♥ him. <3333

Bowman, why did you leave?!?!?!
You could help our smexiest Draco save Gin-Gin :O
I'll :whip: him! :O

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What is he, a descendant of the family of stray donkeys? she thought furiously -- she hated the way he looked at her but (unlike the case had been with Malfoy)
Hey! Mr. Donkey here is a kind and innocent creature, not a blood-hungry sadist!! :gasp:

And did Draco really stare at her bum?
Good Draco. Good boy.
-tackles-

princess of*hp* 11-11-2009 09:16 PM

Great chapter! Wonder what's gonna happen after Ginny wakes up? :gasp:
And Draco *sigh*, what to say about the smexeh slythie...
Wish I was imprisoned so he could save me! :drool:
And thanks for the writing tip :glomp:, I have lotsa ideas but don't put them on my computer much.
And the stray donkey returns... again! :mwaha:

-Mel

Lislchen 11-11-2009 09:46 PM

*waves Bowman fl-*
:gasp: :gasp:

HE LEFT?! He just disapparated?!
:faint:


But...but...well, as long as Draco doesn't leave...
I don't think he will...not before he got Ginny out there safely anyway. :eyebrows:

Another amaaaaaaaazing chapter of course!
:loved: :loved:

<3 <3

JeshieRAWR 11-11-2009 10:12 PM

Awww!!!
Draco kind of cares for Ginny.....
or he will!!!
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
:shifty:
PAMS!
I^IjessI^I
__________

Maxilocks 11-12-2009 01:36 AM

I love y'all.

Replies when I come back from college.
*mega clings to Team Draco* =DD


Mrs_Molly_Weasley 11-12-2009 09:40 PM

:whistle: There's another awesome chapter!! Keep it up, my lovely Señorita! :D

Maxilocks 11-13-2009 03:34 AM

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Originally Posted by Harita (Post 8809693)
awesome Maixe....waiting for more and more...

Thanks a bunch, luff. ^^
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Originally Posted by Whitterz (Post 8809734)
Maxie, I told you I'd read

You did not. =p
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Plus I wanted to talk to you. :lol: Yes, I am that lame.
Awww. *shnuggle* You have me on MSN, bebeh.
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Originally Posted by My Neh-teh-leh (Post 8809906)
IYou could help our smexiest Draco save Gin-Gin :O

Bowman: I have better things to do, than to listen to the ideas of a purebloods-are-better mini-veela. *nose in air*
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Hey! Mr. Donkey here is a kind and innocent creature, not a blood-hungry sadist!! :gasp:
Ginny: How do YOUUU know? *eyes*
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And did Draco really stare at her bum?
WHAT? :gasp: He did NOTHING of that kind. =O
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Originally Posted by Melelel (Post 8810612)
Great chapter!

Thanks a bunch, luff. <3
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Wish I was imprisoned so he could save me!
*locks you up* :evil:
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And thanks for the writing tip :glomp:, I have lotsa ideas but don't put them on my computer much.
And the stray donkey returns... again! :mwaha:
You're most welcome, hunny, and YUS! Mr. Donkey is only too glad to let y'all have a teensy-weensy glimpse of his awesome self. =DD
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Originally Posted by Liishaterz (Post 8810764)
HE LEFT?! He just disapparated?!
:faint:

Well, he did find Draco's views offensive. =p
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Another amaaaaaaaazing chapter of course!
:loved: :loved:
Super thanks, luff. *shnuggles you lyk anything*
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Originally Posted by JesshLuffYAY (Post 8810904)
Awww!!!
Draco kind of cares for Ginny.....
or he will!!!

Draco: I do not, and WILL NOT! *glares at you*
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Originally Posted by YAYAYAY (Post 8813989)
There's another awesome chapter!! Keep it up, my lovely Señorita! :D

Thank youuuuuuu! *eats you* Oops. =p






* * * Alright, guys. My computer crashed yesterday, and it's still not working properly, so no new chapter for now. =[ I will probably be online MUCH later today, or tomorrow, so maybe a chapter then. =[ But thank you for sticking around, and I hope none of you leave. :D


Wenzlebug 11-13-2009 05:09 AM

aww.. I missed talking to my Maxters on messenger..

anyway that post was really great..

I love seeing Draco saving Ginny..

:lol:

Pams!

Maxilocks 11-13-2009 02:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Wenzter (Post 8815561)
aww.. I missed talking to my Maxters on messenger..

I miss talking to you, too! :loved:
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anyway that post was really great..
Thanks a bunch, Wenzter'er. =DD


Jessica 11-13-2009 02:36 PM

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“There is a Choreographer in the wings.”
Luvly quote! So it's lyk... a belief in fate?
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He shrugged, Malfoy opened his mouth to respond, and Bowman had disapparated, immaterialized into thin air - gone.
OMGERZ! He just........ left lyk that? Wowz! :D :D :D
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Some say - although it is disputed whether their words are entirely true - that men are born protectors, and perhaps that was what Draco Malfoy now realized. Much as he hated to admit it, he knew he was falling into an aspect of his personality that he, himself, had not known of. Or perhaps - no, definitely - had known, but always repressed because he knew it would come to no good in the climate he resided in - his father, mad with his desire for power and authority, would never treat his son's better instincts in a good way. Draco was not inherently good, like a lot of people, but he was also not the dark a lot of people were - and he knew that now, knew that he could not let a person - a girl - suffer a cruel death, when he knew there was a good chance he could save her, a tiny chance that she may even hold her as her last hope, may even be depending on him.

Nobody had depended on him like this, before.
Maxo you totally explained him! I mean.. this is really well-written an' I totally love how you put it all! So deep... GREAT work!!!!
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The man whose fault the situation was screamed at the top of his lungs as he tried to flee, tripped over Malfoy’s outstretched leg -- and fell headfirst into the fire.
GOOOD! He deserved that, the evil THING! :@ :@ :@
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I CAN'T BELIEVE I'M BLACKING OUT AGAIN!
Awwz... She really wants to be part of the action doesn't she?

Love,
~~Jay~~

Maxilocks 11-13-2009 02:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Jay
Luvly quote! So it's lyk... a belief in fate?

Credit goes to Denis Postle. =DD

&& that line is definitely open to interpretation. :whistle:

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Maxo you totally explained him! I mean.. this is really well-written an' I totally love how you put it all! So deep... GREAT work!!!!
*blushcling* Thank you! I tried, you know. I really want to show who Draco really is. The way I see him, he's not the typical "good guy," but he defo has his qualities. =]
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Awwz... She really wants to be part of the action doesn't she?
Yesh. *pets her* ^____________^


Jessica 11-13-2009 02:42 PM

His qualities? Sure... he iz HOT for one thing. :P :P :P

But really, good job Maxo. I forgot to mention.............. "His pendant, coupled with the Noventus Curse" ----- nice curse there! :D :D :D It sounds so unique. =D =D
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What is he, a descendant of the family of stray donkeys? she thought furiously --
An' I luved this line, didn't get to quote it. :O :O :O


Love,
~~Jay~~

Maxilocks 11-13-2009 02:48 PM

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Originally Posted by Jay (Post 8816192)
Sure... he iz HOT for one thing.

Draco: I am, aren't I? :eyebrows:
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But really, good job Maxo. I forgot to mention.............. "His pendant, coupled with the Noventus Curse" ----- nice curse there! :D :D :D It sounds so unique.
Thanks, luff. The incantation - Noventus - comes from the Latin for "new discovery." Because the curse helps find or "discover" people. =]
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An' I luved this line, didn't get to quote it. :O :O :O
Mr. Donkey was only too happy to grace the chapter, yes he was.

:P


Jessica 11-13-2009 02:50 PM

Yes you are Draco! :P :P :P



An' oooh, really nice. Latin! :D :D :D Leonti was a bit of Latin too, ryt?

Love,
~~Jay~~

Maxilocks 11-13-2009 02:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Joolsh (Post 8809644)
Ah! That's why there was nothing when I googled it! I am imagining a sort of evil Pre-Raphealite beauty who is demanding the sacrifice of magical people.

You googled it? Eep, you are thorough! =DD

But yes, I would like to imagine her sort of... *powerful*, too. Only, I don't think she would have been someone who liked to have people sacrifice. Maybe she just hated black magic? Or evil witches? xD

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Neville flavoured cookies? Yum!:xd:
YUS! Would you like some, then? *gives you TWO* =DD
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Originally Posted by Jay
Leonti was a bit of Latin too, ryt?

Russian, actually. :lol: Leonti = lion.


Jessica 11-13-2009 03:03 PM

The chapter I THINK I didn't leave a review for.
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“Put two and two together, will you, dumbo?” he said, his grey eyes malevolent as he spoke. “I said we can’t stay here, you said you agree. We’re leaving.”
:lol: :lol: :lol: Luv him!
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“You’re walking out?” she asked, impressed by his stupidity.
Impressed by his stupidity? Haha, great use of words!
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“No one’s going to behead me, Weaselhead, my face is too pretty,” he replied, a smirk playing around his lips.
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Her incredulity at the knowledge that he had left her alone (what if another lion had come while he was away? Oh my!) had barely begun when her incredulity at being told she had a thick head overcame it. “If my head is thick, yours isn’t any less than a giant-sized water-melon,” she began furiously, but he had already turned around and walked off.
LMAOZ! Those two are too funny. They have PERFECT chemistry!!!!
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“Very optimistic, Weasley,” Malfoy drawled. “At this rate of optimism, we’re going to be in Hogwarts by the next milsecond.”
:rotfl: :rotfl: Another good line! Catchy!
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“A stake or a wizard?”

“A wizard, you dumbo.”

“That was an attempt at humour, you idiot!”
I am SO goin' to laugh my head ovv now... these two are too hilarious!
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But the look on her face surprised him, not angry, not fiery, but far-off, as if she was present, not in the now and here, but in a horrible memory.
She remembers her first year doesn't she? :( :( :( Poor Ginz!
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“Stop imagining things - your stray donkey friend does not have the time to follow us.”
:lmao: :D :D :D
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Within moments, they were surrounded by angry-looking men, their eyes full of hatred, and fire-wrapped sticks raised above their heads.
I went "OH NOOOOOOOO!" when I read this part. :( :( :(

Love,
~~Jay~~

Maxilocks 11-13-2009 03:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Jay (Post 8816247)
Impressed by his stupidity? Haha, great use of words!

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:rotfl: :rotfl: Another good line! Catchy!
Thanks a bunch, sweetie. =DD
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LMAOZ! Those two are too funny. They have PERFECT chemistry!!!!
Draco && Ginny: WHATTT? We do NOT! :gasp:
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She remembers her first year doesn't she?

I think so. =[


Jessica 11-13-2009 03:33 PM

Haha..... we'll see what you two say by the end of this story, you two!!!! *pets Draco an' Ginny* So adorable... but you don't know what's in store for you two, do you? :mwaha: :evil: :evil:

Lolz, you just made me evil Maxo. :D :D :D

Love,
~~Jay~~

Maxilocks 11-13-2009 03:35 PM

Riiight. What I am going to do now is callled... UPDATING!

Teehee, chapter coming up. *shnuggles y'all* <3


Jessica 11-13-2009 03:38 PM

YOU GO CHICKA!

I can't wait for the chapter.

It helps that I'm FINALLEE up to date now! :D :D :D

Love,
~~Jay~~

Maxilocks 11-13-2009 03:39 PM

*eyes the JayMay*

You'll like this chapter, I think.
REALLY like it. :whistle:



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