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hmmmm......interesting lots of twists.... i'd perfer a dog to and VICTORIA IS HIS HALF SISTER AHHHHHHHH RUN DRACO RUN hmmmm are they dead no DRACO CANT DIE ...neither can Harry but i dont care.....BELLA AND VICKI HAVE TO DIE -kills Bella Vicki gets away- |
Oh no...again, nothing good's happening. They should know that Draco really didn't betray them. Only Bella can die...no Draco, no way Harry, please post the next part soon! ☆★☆★ Mindy |
So Victoria is Bella's daughter... I was wondering if she was related to Draco somehow after the incident but I didn't picture Bellatrix being her mom :lol: Lots of twists in the chapter :gasp: AWESOME! Can't wait for the next post. PAMS! ~Sarah |
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Here is the next chapter to Beautiful Liar! Chapter 22: Hermione and Ron stayed where they were. They were to scared to move. They both wanted to run to their best friend and Hermione wanted to run to Draco but for some reason shock kept them where they were. A few minutes passed, then… “Stupid Malfoy!” Harry snapped as he got up. “Why did you use that spell! I had her cornered already!” “Well if you would have listened to me in the first place none of this would have happened!” Draco snapped back as he stood up himself. “I don’t have to listen to you! We would have died if I had listened to you!” “No we wouldn’t!” “Okay fine we would have passed out and would have never woken up again! Does that sound better!” “Both of you shut up!” Hermione cried as Ron and her ran towards them. “Harry we thought you were dead!” Ron said as he reached Harry and gave his best friend a hug. Hermione was next. “Mione I can’t breathe!” Harry gasped. “Sorry” Hermione said as she let Harry go. Ron continued to talk to Harry as Hermione turned to Draco. “Draco…” Hermione said as she approached him. “Yeah?” Draco asked. Hermione hit Draco on the head. “You aren’t suppose to combine those two spells you idiot! I taught you better!” Hermione yelled as she threw her arms around Draco. “I’m sorry Professor!” Draco laughed as he hugged Hermione back. “And Hermione…I really do love you…I would never abuse you like that. You know that right?” “I do now…your not a Beautiful Liar are you?” Hermione replied. "I told you so!" Draco smiled. “Good news is that Bellatrix is dead” Harry said. “She can be with Voldie now”. Everyone laughed. “Let’s go…we have a graduation to go too” Ron said as he went over to Ginny. Harry however rushed forward and picked her up first. “Geez Harry if I didn’t know any better I’d say you were eager to take her home” Ron smiled. Harry laughed. Harry, carrying Ginny, and Ron exited the room first and dissaperated outside in the hall. Hermione followed. Draco was about to do the same when he noticed Victoria was awake and was watching everyone leave. Draco went over to her. “Your stupid mother’s dead” Draco snapped. “I know…I was awake when it happened” Victoria said. “It…it doesn’t bother you?” Draco asked confused. “No…I never liked her. I just did what she told me to do because I was rewarded with food. She never let me eat unless I did something to have earned a decent meal”. Draco was shocked at what he was hearing. He had always thought Victoria lived a happy rich life. “Do you…do you want to come back with me?” Draco asked. Victoria looked up at Draco and smiled. “No…I hurt Ron and you and everyone else. I can’t go back…” “Yes you can! You can start over…just like I did” Draco said. “I can’t Draco…I have hurt so many already…it’s a miracle I am still alive”. “Victoria come on…” Draco said as he helped her up. Victoria stumbled…her leg was broken. “That Hermione can cast a strong spell when she is angry” Victoria said. Draco laughed. “At least she didn’t punch you in the face. She left me a nice bruise one time”. Victoria laughed, “You got beat up by a girl”. “Shut up!” “But at least it was a pretty girl…and a smart one too…” Draco smiled. “You know…Ron might give you a second chance” Draco said. “I doubt it…I really hurt him…I wouldn’t give myself a second chance…” Victoria sighed. “Yes well I’m not you now am I? I could never pull that dress off” said a voice. Ron had turned up again. He had come looking for Draco. He picked up Victoria and turned to Draco, “Hermione is waiting for you…she picked out a nice new clean dress robe for you”. “Oh lord” Draco said as he dissaperated. “Ron I’m sorry” Victoria said. “We’ll talk later…we need to go graduate and go show the world the little that we have learned in our seven years of learning…” Ron said. Victoria laughed as Ron and her left the dusty dark room behind to replace it with the brightly lit Hospital Wing. I hope you all enjoyed! And just to let you all know this is the second to last chapter...I know...I'm sad too...:( Love, Emma |
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Awesome update! Kinda confuzzled me about twice (one is above), but it's still awesome! Aw, only two chapters left? :cry: Well... I can't wait to read 'em tho! PAMS! ~Sarah |
Awsommmee Post..!! amsadd its ending....!!! Damn Draco turned good :P!! |
amazing post so said that it's one of the last thought....you'll just have to think up a new idea to comfort your avid readers... |
Aww how sad!!! PAMS soon though! |
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phew! ok I finally caught up! that was soo cute! awww all the couples are together :loved: PAMS! -Bells ♥♥ |
Last chapter to Beautiful Liar! :( Okay everyone...here is the last chapter to Beautiful Liar. I am going to be gone for a week and probably will have no access to a computer! :cry: So I decided to post the last chapter today. I would like to thank all of you for sticking with my story and reading it! I really appreciate it a lot! I will finish I'll Stand By You soon as well and then I will post up two new FF's! So without further interuptions here is the last chapter! Chapter 23: “Mr. Harry Potter” McGonagall called out. Harry walked up to the stage and took his diploma. “Congratulations Harry” McGonagall smiled. “Thank you Professor” Harry said as he went over and stood next to Hermione, Draco, and the newly recovered Victoria. Ron joined them a little while later. “Can you believe it? We are graduates!” Hermione cried as she looked at her diploma. “I know! It’s a big shocker I’m up here…remember in third year when you told me I was a brainless git and that I would never graduate?” Ron said. Hermione blushed, “No…I don’t remember” “Yeah well I do. And look Mione! I am holding the same piece of paper like you! So Ha!” Everyone laughed. Everyone stopped talking however when Dumbledore walked up to the microphone and started talking. “Hermione I thought you said muggle electronics don’t work here at Hogwarts?” Harry whispered. “That’s what I though…” Hermione said. Harry gasped, “First time you were ever wrong!” “Shut up Harry!” “When you two decide to stop acting like first years do let us know!” Professor McGonagall snapped. “Sorry professor” Harry and Hermione said at the same time. “Now that I have everyone’s attention” Dumbledore began, “I would like to say a couple of things before I let my graduates go and explore what awaits them outside these old walls”. “I would stay if I had the choice,” Hermione mumbled. Dumbledore continued. “I am sure you all know that Lord Voldemort is now dead and will never bother us again”. Everyone in the Great Hall cheered. “Yes yes it is very pleasant news! But let me warn you all that it does not give you an excuse to go and do something…shall we say stupid? You are all capable of doing anything you want…don’t let the dark side take you in…” There was a moment of silence. “Now with that said, all of our graduates have received their diplomas but I have something else to give to a couple of them myself…I would like to start of with Miss Hermione Granger…” Hermione jumped in her seat. “Miss Granger as we all know is the brightest witch who has ever walked these hall and I know she could do whatever she wants as long as she puts her mind to it…I am aware that she wants to become a Healer…and what an excellent one she will be! But until she is ready to walk through that door I would like to offer her a position here at Hogwarts”. Hermione who was in tears gasped, “Me?” Dumbledore turned to Hermione and motioned for her to stand next to him. Hermione walked up to Dumbledore and smiled at everyone. “So I ask you Hermione…would you liked to teach here at Hogwarts as our new Transfiguration teacher?” “Transfiguration? But what about Professor McGonagall?” Hermione asked shocked. “I am retiring next year Hermione” Professor McGonagall said. “And nothing would make me feel better about my retirement if you took my place. You are the best student I have ever had”. Hermione smiled, “I would love to teach here at Hogwarts”. As Hermione said this a million cheers broke out. “Hey! Now that we have the brightest witch of the time teaching us maybe half of us won’t be so stupid!” yelled a first year in the crowd. “Very good!” Dumbledore said. Hermione thanked Dumbledore and McGonagall and went back to her seat. “Now…” Dumbledore continued, “I would like to move on to Mr. Ronald Weasley!” “Me? What could he possibly give me?” Ron asked. “Now Ron I know you have always thought negatively of yourself…but once you gain that confidence you make marvelous things happen!” Dumbledore said. Ron was turning red. “I also happen to know that you love Quidditch! And what an excellent keeper you are! I believe some students even created a song in your honor! So with that said I would like to welcome the captain of the number one Quidditch team in the league…Moses Stone.” Everyone in the room started going crazy and Ron gasped, “It’s him! It’s really him!” Moses stepped on to the stage and everyone stopped yelling. “Hello everyone. As most of you know I am the captain of the Chuddley Cannons and…” Everyone started cheering again. “And we have been looking for an amazing Quidditch player to fill in the position as Keeper since Chris Haze decide to retire. And as we were going through try outs I realized that I had seen an excellent Keeper one day when I came to one of the games held here at Hogwarts. It was Gryffindor versus Slytherin I believe…but to be honest…I didn’t pay much attention to the game!” Everyone laughed. “I was paying attention to the Gryffindor Keeper. And I thought to myself I want that guy on my team. But the thing was Ron was in his 6th year and was to young. So I convinced Chris to stay a little longer at least until Ron was able to join our team. And the day when I could ask Ron Weasley to join our team has finally arrived.” Moses turned to Ron, who was still in shock, and said, “Ron Weasley I am here, obviously, to offer you the position of Keeper on the Chuddley Cannons.” Everyone cheered as Ron got up from his seat and went over to Moses. “You don’t even have to ask! For me I have been on your team since I was five!” Ron said as he shook Moses’ hand. Moses laughed and said, “It’s good to have you on the team! I have the team here today and I would like you to meet them after the ceremony”. “Great!” Ron said as he went back to his seat. Moses then walked off the stage and Dumbledore took his place by the microphone once again. “Now…I have one more person I would like to award…and I think you all know who that person is”. Everyone in the hall looked over to Harry. “Harry if you will come up here” Dumbledore said. Harry walked up to Dumbledore. “Harry throughout your entire time here at Hogwarts I have noticed how much loyalty you have to this school. You have been through a lot here as well and if I were you I would have walked out after all those times we had to keep you locked up inside these very walls.” Harry laughed. “But the thing is you stayed. Why? Because you loved Hogwarts. So as you know I am growing old and my reactions are no longer…well I’m very old Harry” Dumbledore chuckled, “and I would like to offer you the position of Headmaster here at Hogwarts”. Harry looked at Dumbledore as though he were crazy. “Sir I…after all those times I almost made the school collapse…you want to give it to me?” “Yes” Dumbledore smiled. “I…I don’t know what to say I mean…” “Now Harry I know you want to become an Auror and I’m sure you will become one. After all you are Harry Potter! But who said you have to limit yourself to one thing?” Harry looked at Dumbledore and smiled, “I would love to Professor”. Everyone in the crowd cheered as Harry accepted. “Now we will all be safe…er…safer…with him as headmaster! No more bullies!” yelled the same first year that had yelled after Hermione had accepted her position. Harry returned back to his seat. “Headmaster! Harry congratulations!” Hermione said as she hugged Harry. “Thanks!” Harry said. “Now I think it is time to present our graduating class!” Dumbledore said after awhile. “Cheers to the class of …oh my…what year are we in…Oh well congratulations to our Graduating class!” Everyone cheered. Everyone ended up happy and no one had to worry about getting killed by Death Eaters or Voldemort. The rest of his followers had been locked up and the guards at Azkaban were now stronger. Grawp, Hagrid's brother, had found a mate and him and his family now guarded the prison. Two years later… Harry, Ron, and Hermione had remained close friends. Harry had married Ginny as soon as she had graduated from Hogwarts and had become head of the Auror department. He was still headmaster of Hogwarts and had Dumbledore to help him out whenever he needed advice. And apart from being Headmaster of one of the greatest schools in the wizarding world and being head Auror, Harry was also going to become a dad. Ginny was six months pregnant with a baby girl. Ron had joined the Chuddley Cannons as their Keeper but ended up Captain of the team when Moses retired. He led his Quidditch team to the World Cup and had won. He had also married Victoria who had become a top Healer at St. Mungo’s. Victoria had also given Ron a baby boy named Oliver. Hermione had given up her position as the Transfiguration teacher at Hogwarts after a year of teaching and had become Mistress of Magic. She had also married Draco Malfoy who shared Hermione’s position as Minister of Magic. He also helped out charities when he had the chance by giving them part of the Malfoy fortune. “Ginny you can’t eat that! It’s bad for the baby!” Hermione said as she helped Ginny around the house one afternoon. “Just one!” Ginny protested. “No!” Ginny sighed and said, “Fine…” She turned on the radio and listened to the song that was playing. It took her awhile to notice exactly what song it was. “Hermione!” Ginny yelled. Hermione came running into the room and said, “What? What happened?” “Listen!” Hermione listened to the radio… (Oh) It’s not worth our time (Oh) We can live without him Just a beautiful liar The song came to an end and Hermione smiled. “And look at that…we are laughing about what happened”. “Yes we are” Ginny said. Hermione started to sing the song and Ginny joined in. “What a beautiful liar!” the two girl sang as Harry walked through the door. “Beautiful Liar? How the heck can a liar be beautiful?” Harry asked confused. Hermione and Ginny looked at each other and laughed. “You have no idea,” Ginny said as she went over to Harry a gave him a kiss. I hope you all enjoyed the last chapter! And I hope to see you all when my other FF's are up and I hope you all continue to read I'll Stand By You. I love you all! Love, Emma |
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ZOMG! I nearly choked on my Mountain Dew when I read Dumbledore was giving Harry the Headmaster position! (and it woulda been bad cause I'm on my bro's super-awesome-widescreen-surround-sound computer and it nearly game out my nose...). Aw... that's the end... Great end tho! Just can't believe it's over... I just realized something! This is the first F.F of yours I actually read the entire thing of (like, I started in Hidden Love but just didn't continue reading cause I kept forgetting every time I was on) P.S: I posted the last post of Far Away, so if you want to catch up before it goes to the Finished Fan Fiction section, you might wanna start reading where you left off again :lol: |
awww that was a super cute ending! CONGRATS ON A WOMDERFUL FF! -Bells ♥♥ |
Cute ending!!!.... I waz thinking what exactly will Dumbledore give Harry...:lol: been a great Ride...!!!!!!!!!! Hope to find more of your FFs.. !!! Great work Emma.!! |
Awwww! That was such a cute ending! :) I never knew that you were writing another fan fic, if I get a chance, I will read it but my vacation is pretty hectic! LOL! Seriusly, are you concidering writing REAL novells??? You should concider it. LOL!! I'm a little sad that's it's over but i'll live. Good luck with your other fan fics! -*~ Shirel ~*- |
OMG! That was the end :cry: It was a great story Emma :) With a lot of evil cliffies, twists and action :D I will of course keep reading your other FF cause they are good. I still cant belive that was the end!! It was Awsome Emma!!! *Steph* |
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YAY! We both kept up with each other's F.F in some form (even if you lagged behind in Far Away by like, half the story, you finished it :lol:) |
That was a really nice ending!! Everybody got to live their happily ever after!:) You're a really good writer!:yes: I seriously want to read more of your stories! |
Awwwwwww How cute....I wish there was more....Im so happy for Harry getting that Headmaster position. And Hermione getting McGonagalls position! |
NOOOOO it's over it can't be.....IT WAS A WICKED ENDING......Headmaster, teacher, keeper woah.........See you in I'll stand by you |
Oh no! It can't be over! But I have to say that all stories have to end...I know, it's very sad. You made a great ending! I just don't know what else to say...*sniffs* |
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