Lissy - Oh My God! What...Why...You...
Gimme a minute, lost for words...
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This one is for my dear friend LadyV! I even left a small cliffie in her honor! Read Close Encounters to see what I mean!
Close Encounters of the First Kind
*tackle glomps Lissy*
You are way too sweet! Seriously. I'm just too...for words... on with the review...
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The man Sirius ran into went sprawling to the ground, his packages (as he had clearly been shopping for Hogwart’s supplies) scattered all around him. Upon noticing the man’s face, Sirius quickly averted his eyes and turning his head away, mumbled an apology before making a hasty retreat.
So thought it was going to be Snape. Don't know why...Lupin was just as good though, more emotional angst.
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One glance at the man’s tired, careworn face wrenched his heart in sympathy.
I love Lupin. I hate that he suffers so much, I really do, he's one of the most decent wizards there is, and he cares so much for Harry and *lowers voice* other people.
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(he could not bring himself to think of the fourth member of their group)
Brilliantly done. He would nearly be sick at the mere thought of him. Stupid rat.
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One, just visible beyond a stack of books, looked so much like his old friend that it took all of Sirius’ willpower not to call out to him. But his logical mind reasoned, “not James, Harry.”
LoL. He had a hard time with that before, it's going to be even harder now. I love how you just 'get' Sirius. It's all just so...so...
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Suddenly Tonks let out a startled squeak and Bettina Breakheart was tossed clumsily back onto the shelf.
“I got everything on this list,” Remus approached Bill who ticked off a number of items from his own list.
*Smiles knowingly and giggles*
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The group started to move deeper into the store and Sirius made to follow, when suddenly, a strong hand clasped him on the shoulder.
Uh oh. Oh God, it's Snape, isn't it? I knew it! He'd have to be in there somewhere, and he is going to be teaching him afterall, he would surely recognise the boy who had taunted him for all those years...OH MY GOD! HE's soooooo going to get his own back, always taking away points and giving him detentions! Oh well, at least he can keep Harry company...then again, it could just be Hagrid. Or Dumbledore...
Sorry, I'm babbling. A most excellant cliffhanger Lissy! I'm on the edge of my seat - can't wait for the next post!
Your writing is positively superb, not just the plot line but your structure, composition, eye for detail and characterisation are all fatastic.
(what did you really think I'd let you get away with that littlestunt without getting my own back?)
Love much,
LadyV.
PS: I mean every word. Just in case you thought I was joking...I'm not.