Hey Seneca. What a delightful chapter!
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She only saw Tom Riddle once, though, but she didn’t say anything to him, because he was with his girlfriend.
If she's lucky she won't see him again. You write about Tom so casual. It feels so scary!
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“We’ve only been here for a couple of minutes.” He said, looking around at the pile of books already stacked both on and around the table.
I'm glad Jaxon is showing her things slowly. If she reacted this way about a book store, think how she would react to a movie.
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“A Christmas Carol.” Jaxon’s brow furrowed. “Never heard of it.”
I love that you picked this to be an example of things she might have been interested in.
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“Go ahead outside. I want to talk to the owner first.” He straightened and glanced around the shop as Coralie nodded and stood up to leave.
I'm anxious to find out what this is about.
Great post Seneca. I'll be watching for your next.
