Connie!

I’m so sorry that our time together on your Fan Fiction has come to an end... and what an end it was! It was the best! Your ideas were ingenious and everything fit together so well. JK would be so proud of you! But, since she’s not here, I will have to congratulate you for her.

Connie, this was one of your best chapters. I won’t say ‘the best’ because you had quite a few that I thought were the best. : P Sorry, each time a new chapter came out, I kind of changed my mind... it’s a girl’s prerogative and right though.

So, here we go... First and foremost, I love how you were effortlessly able to incorporate JK into your Epilogue. It was definitely one of my favourite parts, and the fact that you were able to use Jim and Crookshanks to do so, just made it that little bit better. The way you were able to use actual Harry Potter facts within your fiction allowed us, the readers, to feel a closeness to the actual Harry Potter series. It also gave us a look into JK’s personal life. Well done!

Following the same flow of thought... it was inspirational how you were able to explain why your story wasn’t included within the actual Harry Potter series. After all, werecats should be protected at all costs and the world just isn’t ready for Tesseracts, power and so forth. One question though... what kind of doughnut was it? That was one small detail you really should've included!

I also liked the concept of good versus evil. You’re right, you know... the children of today seem to have a hard time grasping the concept: whether due to peer pressure, ignorance or simple stupidity. Well done again!

Next, I enjoyed how you numerically solved each of JK’s questions. It was well organised and allowed the reader to easily follow the progress of your storyline. I won’t go into great detail here since you did such a great job in writing the solutions. I will, however, reiterate my praise for your writing.

Okay... so I do have to bring up a couple though. I loved how you were able to explain away the recovery of Dumbledore’s memories by comparing it to the return of Harry’s at the time of Dumbledore’s death.

AND... I loved the explanation of the lemon... I won’t even complain about it not being a kiwi... because the lemon works perfectly. Sort of a sweet ending on a sour subject for me! As for the shirt that Ginny kept of Harry’s: “Love Is The Music My Heart Dances To”... you did a fantastic job. You’re right; it was the perfect apparel for Ginny to wear on their honeymoon night and so very romantic!

And finally, I loved that Crookshanks finally found a place to stay to await his impending death. It was perfect ending to your story Connie. The poor boy/cat deserved a peaceful, loving and happy ending to his rather hard yet adventurous life. Thank you for thinking of that.

Now... the title meaning... I find it rather intriguing and can argue the pros and cons of each. You have truly created a title that aptly describes and enhances the story. Well done my friend. Your story has been well thought out and planned right down to the smallest detail.

Connie, I’m so sorry that your Fan Fiction has come to an end, but I guess it is only right that it does and that it ends on such a successful note. Thank you for your time and for sharing your wisdom and love of writing with us.

Katie