Hello Harita. Sorry I'm taking so long to comment. I read this very early tis morning but was too sleepy to comment.
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For one the school was where she created her own identity, the school was where she got to know her potential while for the other this school was where she got friends, friends that she knew would stick to her for the rest of her life even when they were out of school now and for the third, this school was nothing but place she could call a home in this foreign land, a place where she was herself and loved every minute of her stay. She now carries the memories of the school that would last for the rest of her life and she could never have been so great full for the strict looking Professor McGonagall for accepting her in her school on that dreary rainy day when she was almost about to walk out of Hogsmeade…
I love Sara's way of viewing things.
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Sara’s eyes lingered around the crowd a bit and then she turned and followed her friends.
Ah, so sad. Why isn't Shaun there?
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“Had a busy day, he said hi to you”
I hope it wasn't Catherine keeping him busy.

Great post Harita. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.