So Maryan is a witch, you can't spell to save your life Kellybear *teases* You really should edit some of those minor errors like hel for help or something. And the butterflies, I loved the butterflies, and having him say Hannah when he meant Luna brilliant and a total misdirection ... I loved it. I gasped and was all WTF??!! until I realized what you were doing but then I had the benefit of waiting and having all the posts already up I can't help it, I pwn.

Your story rocks hard so keep rockin' it!