Hello Emily, Abi. I'm sorry I haven't been keeping up with the comments. These past few months have been pretty hard on me. I am keeping up with the story and I think you two are doing great. I can't pick out highlights from the last three posts I haven't commented on, but I will say, I think Emily and Abi both need to be turned over someones knees and throughly spanked for disrespecting Sirious the way they did, for running away, and for treating each other the way they are.
Teasing of course. They would be black and blue and wouldn't be able to sit down for a week.
They do have a lot of issues to work out, and sooner rather than later. I am most worried about
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“Have a good time with your wolf pack. I’ll see you when term ends,” Emily said as she reached up and kissed him on the cheek.
I feel so bad for Remus. What a hurtful brushoff, and seal of sarcasm! He really shouldn't let her get away with that. But, on the other hand, I loved this:
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“If you’re not going to share your thoughts, then don’t you dare read into mine, Alicia Daniels!” Emily yelled at her. Jamie looked stricken, but Alicia seemed to know that it was coming. She looked down at her hands, before meeting her eyes.
“Fine…” Alicia whispered, sighing.
I think it's brilliant the way you girls are able to write the story so well. You are both doing an outstanding job. I'll be watching for your next post.