Hello Harita. This was short but, plenty to think on. Great writing Harita. I love how you give points for us to think about. You tell your story in an easy to follow way, yet makes us think about everything we read, so we don't miss anything. I love how Catherine is resting in bed thinking, analizing the various people in here life at the moment. She loves the feeling of what Ron and Hermione have for each other. Yet, when she thinks of Harry:
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Her mind drifted to Harry. She had always read about him just as the Chosen One and the Boy Who Lived and all, and all about his greatness but to actually be there in his presence she found that a bit intimidating, not that they were scaring her but their popularity in the press in compared to their humility in personal life really gave her the feeling.
It wasn't of Harry and Ginny, just Harry. I think she is in awe of him, being able to be a real person, even with all his fame. And do I feel the slightest bit of intrepidation in her thoughts of him? She will continue to watch him, and be careful of him. Why? Maybe I'm wrong.
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As she replayed the entire evening back in her head, her heart and mind constantly went back to Shaun, who has turned out to be such a confidante in just a few months. She couldn’t trust anyone so much as she trusts him. But it wasn’t just that he had become great friends just in such a short time, that he is even with Rebecca but just that he had began to trust her the same way
I read through this whole post, and came back to this.
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As she replayed the entire evening back in her head, her heart and mind constantly went back to Shaun, who has turned out to be such a confidante in just a few months. She couldn’t trust anyone so much as she trusts him. But it wasn’t just that he had become great friends just in such a short time, that he is even with Rebecca but just that he had began to trust her the same way
It's like she really is starting to fall for him, and her thought about Sara show jealousy, yet when I read this:
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She didn’t know how long she laid down thinking of him and smiling at her memories with him when she suddenly realized what she was doing. She frowned a bit and then turned again on the other side and closed her eyes and tried to sleep.
It's like she chides herself and disciplines herself not to get invilved. So, is she really on a mission, and can't let herself be distracted?
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She smiled. Turning back around she walked back to her bed and laid down again with her hand on her forehead and her mind started to work on its own accord and then her thoughts again were directed towards Shaun.
‘what the hell!’
But then she let them flow, and later with a small smile playing on her lips she fell fast asleep…
So, I'm now back to not knowing anything for sure. Great writing Harita. You are very talented. Study hard, but have a wonderful day. I'll be watching for your next post. I love this story more and more with each post.
