I laughed each time Draco irritated her.

I didn't think so either, but it is creepy isn't it? You can't blame Harry for thinking it though, I mean he felt himself being the snake.

Awe... don't hurt yourself laughing at me here, but I feel sorry for Draco. But then again I have to remember Draco isn't used to taking verbal abuse from anyone. I hope he doesn't fall off the band wagon and revert back to his old ways.

I love how you're writing Harry here. I don't think he ever talked to anyone like this in the books, I mean he was dark and gloomy in the books, but, here he is talking to his sister. It is very typical of how he would talk to a her. And her final response to him was also typical. It was good you put these qualities in. I appreciate the realism it causes.

Great post Emily. I'll be watching for the next.