Hello Harita. I've been missing you so much. I check my email everyday to see if I got a notice saying you posted. I know you are very busy with your studies. I'm thrilled you was able to give us this post.
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Heya people...another post is up...sorry for such a long long delay...
It's ok. Your post is always worth the wait.
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“Sara, seems to be very close to all of you especially Ronald” she stated as they were walking.
Is she just trying to fish information out of him? Maybe she's interested in Shaun, and she is just saying this to see his reaction if maybe he is interested in Sara.
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“So, Sara and you were best friends?”
“Are best friends” he said unknowingly emphasizing the ‘Are’ as they strolled back with his hands in his jeans pocket
“are” she murmured and smiled a bit.
“I mean, yeah you seemed to know her very well” she said. Shaun nodded but kept silent.
Yeah, unless you say otherwise, that is what I'm going to think. It points to that.
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Shaun looked at her for sometime stopped walking and then sighed. He could trust to tell her, tell her everything at least as much as he knows. He began to open his mouth but then stopped and looked away and resumed his silent walk.
No he couldn’t do that. The more the people know about how Sara ended up here the more it will be a problem for Sara and much more easier for people tracking down on her to know where she is.
Ahh! When I started reading this, I was so afraid Shaun was going to tell her. What if she is a spy, for the "other people". This is something else I'm wondering about. Reguardless of what I think is going on in the story, I loved how you wrote that piece. I love it that he was going to tell her, but remembered his need to keep Sara safe.
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“Look, Cathe. Its not that I don’t trust you, no…I trust you and all my friends but there are certain things that I wont want to disclose to anyone even you. It’s the others whom I don’t trust”
“you don’t have to talk to ‘others’ about it, just me” she said
“you always had” she continued. Catherine didn’t get what was his point. Why was he hesitating on speaking out what he was about to.
Shaun looked at her thinking on how to make her understand that the others that he was talking of are those people who might cause problems for Sara. But he didn’t say anything and quietly lead Catherine towards her house.
She has to understand he has things he cannot talk about in his life. She's always known that, but now that she met Sara, she is either feeling threatened by her, or she needs information to tell her spy people. I myself like it that he's not telling her. I want him and Sara to be together.
Well, sorry for taking up so much space, and saying little, but, I wanted to tell you my uptake on it. I'm thrilled with your story, and I can't wait to read more.