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Originally Posted by
Connie 
Hello Emily. Again, I am speechless as to what I can say. And no, that's not a bad thing from your story telling. It's just well, It's soooooooooooooo sad!
I know, but it was something that had to happen. The next post is happier though
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I love the presentation of the story very much here. We all knew it was coming, but, still you made it seem like it's the first time I heard about Bill, and Dumbledore. The devistation was real, and the heartache for our lovely Emily was real. You see, I was wondering how you would present Emily, since she obviously already knew about the things to come. And you made the news overwheming for her just as if she didn't know. It's because death, distruction, and devistation is hard to take in no matter how many times you hear of it, when it involves the ones you love. Tremendous writing Emily. I'll be watching for your next post.
Thank you so much, Connie
I was hoping I did okay by her emotions with the news.
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Oh! Wait, there is one thing:
I'm taking this as an advance warning of terrible things to come. Great work Katie.
Ohh, well there may be a
few things in store...
Oh and I know you
meant Emily, not Katie, right?
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Originally Posted by
Morag Hi Emily! Another Great Post.
Thanks, Sophie
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It was sad that Dumbledore has died now. I didn't realise it would be so soon.
Ohh, yeah, I realized that when I was posting that it probably seemed far sooner than when it should have happened, but it needed to happen. And I'm trying to get everything on its way... So, we'll probably skipping through a lot of stuff... kind of... You'll see what I mean...
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Like I said earlier
It's so soon. I can't believe he's gone
You should have seen me when I was reading through HBP the first time. I just remember thinking that he HAS to come back. I mean there was no way that
Dumbledore could be dead. I cried so much when he died.