Oh wow... It looks so pretty!
but I see what you mean about it looking over crowded... Hmm.
Maybe you could do it, with just the first three verses... and the second to last verse...
That way some of the pictures would be able to be made stronger.
And ... if it's possible, can you make the picture of me and my two friends dressed up and the picture where there's a big group of us dressed up in crazy dance clothes like ... brighter than the other pictures.

But THANKYOU! This one still looks REALLY pretty