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emilyblack 
Ohmygosh, you FINALLY updated! Kidding, kind of
No, you're RIGHT. I've been SO BADLY BEHAVED.
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Awe, I feel really bad for her.
*Huggles Genevieve*
You know... she sort of tugged on my heart strings too, but imagine how bad Rae felt.
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You're an amazing writer; it was written beautifully, just like all of your other posts.
PLEASE PAMS!
Wow, thank you! I promise to update SOON. Ish. I have to circulate my other threads.
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Biochemkris YAY!!! and *sniff* Fee is sad in my head.
Great update. I can't wait to meet Alexander, though seeing Anj and Alec interact is certainly a hoot.
I bet! I couldn't have both Fee and Vivi around for this or I would have just had to chalk up Rae as a basket case.
And... whoa. Yeah. Alexander is hard to write TOO. Another character who isn't really mine.
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Grangerfn1 Until this moment, I was HORRIFIED. My heart ACHED For the poor girl, and then that final statement sent the biggest goofy grin across my face. Yaaaay! 
That's the BEST.
Bahhh cuuuutE!!! I like him. He's a gem.
Ugh. I love you so much. I just want to give you the biggest hug in the whole world.
Never stop writing this story right here, k? I like it. Let it stay here forever. <3 You're bossy. I find it interesting that one of the moments that I found to be the saddest in the update made you HAPPY. Hmm. You like it when Rae is unhappy, don't you? DON'T YOU? Fess up, Julz.
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Mad Eye Touz A box of rocks? Honestly. A box of rocks? Lainey gave them books, I'm so certain. BUT ROCKS? Alec ... sigh. Just sigh.
The "I HATE YOU" is so .... cringe-worthy. I cringe. Lainey cringes. Admittedly, Clara Belle-Cooper is over there not saying anything - but by her silence, she is clearly saying A LOT, you know? You know.
And the cringing CONTINUES through Vi's... thing. Lainey will be over there, opposite side of CB-C. Picking her nose or something and avoiding all eye contact from henceforth forever.
AND.... might I add: "I never had a brother. I have nothing against them in general." <<< This is so spot on. Lullz. We didn't even DO this scene and it's just... yeah. Good.
I wonder if a frog turned out to be his patronus? hehe HMMMMMmmm.
MAN. Another good one. Better than good. It's kind of like 3 fics in one, you know? And EACH of them are SOO good.
*fangirl*
I talked to you about this already, so I don't HAVE to respond. But I will.
Alec informs me that it is probably NOT a box of rocks. But more like... something else. We can't tell you what. It's a secret.
And yeah. The "I hate you" broke my heart a bit, but I dont' know any kid who didn't know the power in pulling that card.
You can tell CLARA BELLE to shut her FACE. She wasn't invited to our party and she doesn't get to comment on our children. Nope. No say. And... best keep Lainey over there a bit. 'Cause right now we aren't feeling very warm and fuzzy toward her.
I didn't think about it as "three-in-one" because for the most part all three tie together in some way. But I kind of like thinking about it as three separate pieces because the voice used in all three is so different and they work in different ways.
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Obi-Wan K'Lari Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! I feel so bad for the twins
And young Alec...thought he's so cute <3 Lainey is amazing as always
Can't wait for more!!!!!
I think they'll be OK in the end. I can only hope, at least... I'll keep you posted on that one.
Alec IS adorable. He was as a kid and he still is as an adult.
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Droo I seriously hope one day I can write like you. Nuff said.
*huggle* Thanks.