Hello Emily, Welcome home!
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“We may not need it, but we do want it,” George said quietly. “Now, if you’ll excuse us, my wife and I will be staying somewhere else for the night,” George said as he grabbed Emily’s hand and led her upstairs to his room to get their bags.
Oh dear, not a good thing when they start off quiet like that.
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“Of course I’m bloody sure!” he shouted.
Because they get loud with the wrong person.
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Emily held tightly to his hands as he Disapparated. They landed in front of the joke shop. Emily staggered on the ground for a second, holding her ribcage. She gasped painfully, but George took no notice because of the steam rising in his ears.
They should have discussed where they were going to go, instead of him just deciding.

And he shouldn't have screemed at his mother. She was wrong in just makeing her statement the way she did. Even if she was just being the voice of reason, like I wondered about. She can't go off sounding like she is still in charge of his life. But, I still feel sorry for her, him screeming at her. It's just me though, and it does make me wonder how this will be resolved.
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George walked past her and up the stairs with the bags. Emily followed slowly after him, clenching her teeth so she wouldn’t scream. She held onto the railing for dear life as she walked up the stairs.
Awe, poor Emily. I wish she would have told George.
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His eyes blinked repeatedly as he woke up.
I bet he was adorable. Great post Emily. I'll be watching for your next. And once again, just cause I missed you bunches. Welcome home.