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Old 07-11-2010, 06:00 AM   #611 (permalink)
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Janet Lynn Gordon
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Hello Emily. Very, very sweet post. The wedding and reception were very well written. I'm glad you took time with it.
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The three girls giggled as they made their way back outside.
We all know, this won't be the end of the giggling.
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As Emily walked into the tent, she saw George’s eyes go wide, which caused them to erupt into another fit of giggles.
Hehehe Even if I hadn't read the post before I commented I knew that was coming. Nicely done.
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“I don’t think that’s a good idea, Ems,” he said quietly.
The solitude in his voice is heartbreaking.
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“So, did you cast Avada Kedavra when you walked in?” he whispered as he wrapped his arms around her waist, bringing her closer to him.
My heart skipped a beat when I read that line.
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“Because you made my heart stop beating,” he chuckled.


Great post Emily! I'll be watching for your next.
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