I have no clue how to remove a poll Kerri but I know how to love your story!!! I can't believe you didn't tell me you posted but I guess it's my fault for not being o for days. Anyways this was fabulous.

YES.... Neville should be at the Burrow and Hayley says 'I don't want to see him' so she wears the invisibility cloak but then clumsily bumps into him as she turns into the kitchen or something and he finds out because ron is still too furious to keep it bottled up and neville is told by him. Then she starts pleading for him to not hate her because she has never loved a boy so much before. Then he says coldly 'I'm coming to help Ginny, but not you.'

Then they obviously have to get back together but you can do that part.

SORRY, YOUR STORY- JUST A SUGGESTION. PLAY WITH IT IF YOU WANT.