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Originally Posted by
RavenSnape 
“What if you leave me daddy? What am I going to do? What if I need you?”
“I’m not going to leave you, my angel. There is nothing to be afraid of.”
“You just said that you can’t know when you go away. So how can you tell me you aren’t going away, if you don’t know?”
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“But daddy, what if I need you?”
“If I ever leave you, and you need me, if the situation becomes more than you can bear, I will be there for you.”
Ohmygosh! This whole bit was so sweet! Sorry for cutting some of it out, but I didn't want to repeat the whole thing... That is sweet but sad, because he does leave.
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“I-I have found Demeter Black’s granddaughter; the only child of Tobias and Persephone Snape.”
UGH! The slimey git, snitch, tattle tailing, *strong use of profanities that aren't allowed on SS*! I hate Lucius!
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He looked as though he was trying to decide who to torture next when he stopped suddenly; feet away from where Raven’s body would be standing if she were there. “I sense another presence here. A strong, mental presence.”
Raven froze. No way.
I'm with Raven... NO WAY!
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“She’s here. Not physically, but she’s here. Over there.”
Uhg! Once again, you slimey git!
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Voldemort’s face was inches away from Raven’s. “I see you.”
WHAT!?! No way! How can he see her? How is that possible if she's not physically there??
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She raised her arm one last time and…
And? And? AND!? AND WHAT!? You can't just leave it there! PLEASE PAMS!
Great post by the way!
