Hello Harita, Thank you for posting so soon. I love your story so much. I'm sure your readers are still here. It sometimes gets very busy with school and or work to comment on our posts. I'm sure you know how it is. Even if you get discouraged, keep posting.
My heart breaks for Sara. She has gone through so much this past year. She was so happy to see her Shaun, and now she had to tell him about Rahul. My heart now breaks for him also.
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“No,” He stepped back away from Sara his eyes never leaving hers and then with a swish of his cloak he turned away and walked a few meters away from her within seconds and then ‘pop’
But he's just in denyal though, right? It isn't Sara's fault.
Great post Harita. I'll be watching for your next post.