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indifference and pride few could match, and it was a rare occurrence for him to show anger, much less wrath – usually, he would let it bubble under the surface, give it no outlet, until the anger gave way to careful planning,
Signs of a very dangerous young man.
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that he knew how to breed, within himself, his softer sentiments, until they were as sharp as a sword ready for battle
Ahh, a silver fox. He doesn't need anyone or anything because he is crafty enough to have what he wants by his own means. This causes people to be easily impressed by him. He is a master of self control. He reminds me of Malfoy Sr. before he lost favor with Voldemort.
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Instead, he matched her glare for glare.
Scary!
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“What kind of man dies of heartbreak?” Shreya Zabini rolled her eyes.
She never loved her husband! But, Why am I surprised whenever I see this happen? Sadly, it happens, and way to often.
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Shreya turned around to face him again; surprised, when she should not have been, at the coolness of his tones -- and saw the anger seething behind his eyes. It made her want to roll her own, again.
But she didn't. Is she somewhat fearful of him?
And so, they get to the one thing they both agree on. Niether one of them want her to die, by fault of him.
Maxie, another tremendous post. And you said in your last responce to my comment, I make you feel special. Well, it's because you are, and not because of anything I say. But, because you're your wonderful talented self.
And the proof is in your writing. Much love to you. I'll be watching for your next post.