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Old 04-04-2010, 12:14 PM   #139 (permalink)
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Hello Maxie, I'm thankful for your time you took to post this wonderful chapter. I would like to highlight the whole chapter and say:This is my favorite part. I love how Draco's injured pride won't let him feel sorry for himself, but rather feel annoyed with himself for not being in control, and not even being able to remember why. Then, his poor bruised ego tries to make him feel better by calling the place he came to, "on the floor at some common shop." When it's very obvious; he, a Malfoy wouldn't be in a common shop. You can tell the shop was high class by the smell of the fabric and the expensive grain of wood that encased the shoes. But yet, it didn't help him feel better, nor did it help him with what he so badly wants to remember. I love how he is so unsettled at this happening to him that he dosen't even like the way he looksin the mirror. (A first for him I'm sure. ) It all has him so completely unsettled that this, gives presidence over the disastrous meeting he just had with, Mincent Greengrass. And to top itall off, yhat black owl, and the message it delivered!
A brilliant chapter Maxie. I could see things so clearly as if I were watching it on high deffinition tv. Much love to you. And I'll be watching for your next chapter, when you're able.
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