Sorry I didn't respond earlier when I read this post. I was actually here when you posted. How convenient, yes? Anyway, As I said earlier and didn't get to finish posting, I think this has been your best post so far. You improve with each chapter, and even though it has always been enjoyable to read, it is even more so now. You must be very comfortable with your story now, and hit your stride. That's very good.
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“Well, she is a squib. She was forced to go to Muggle School, and do Muggle things, even though she really wanted to be apart of the magical community. Because of that, she is foul to anyone associated with the wizarding world. She knows that all of her sister’s kids are wizards, so she is going to be downright unpleasant,” she finished. She loaded a lot of food on her plate. Particularly, mashed potatoes, which she seemed to be wolfing down. She took a large swig of pumpkin juice, and then continued.
This reminds me of what Harry had to deal with, living with his Aunt Petunia. Poor Aden.
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Curiosity welled up back inside Albus about who Snape was.
Yeah, me too! I'm curious about him myself.
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don't forget tolerance and respect for all people!
What a very nice thing to say. I appreciate that very much. Great post. I'll be watching for your next one.