11-14-2009, 05:04 AM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
Posts: 4,526
Hogwarts RPG Name: Cherrinell Baron First Year x3
| JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3 Quote:
Better Than Chocolate
I see now why this ficcie is called Chocolate Kisses.  Quote:
"How does it happen that birds sing, that snow melts, that the rose unfolds, that the dawn whitens behind the stark shapes of trees on the quivering summit of the hill?"
BEAUTIFUL quote! It's VERY poetic, very touchin'! Quote:
“I didn’t start that fire, Malfoy, and I could have fixed my head myself. Where are we anyway? The Land of the Stray Donkeys?”
Mr. Donkey returns!  Quote:
“Aren’t you happy I’m physically disabled, melon-head?”
He can make even his own misfortune sound... amazingly sarcastic. Quote:
“Congratulations, Weaselhead,” he said finally, his tones anything but grateful. “You managed to fix it without making my finger sprout extra hands.”
“You’re welcome,” Ginny said sarcastically
These two are too good! Quote:
He would, she could almost swear, not leave her in danger, if he knew of it - he would let himself get hurt, but he would do, she seemed to realize now, all in his power to save her - no, not her, but any girl.
Why did that thought sting?
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She would not weep over little things, would not back out of a challenge -- she could hold her own and, at the end of the day, she did not need him to protect her.
Why did that thought sting?
This is priceless. *writes it down*  Quote:
Was he a good kisser?
OH WOW! THIS IS AWESOME! Quote:
He smelled like citric acid or lemon juice or – What am I doing?
One word: OHMYGOSHERZ! I should quoted that whole kiss!!!!!!! The way you wrote it Maxo.... so intense, totally amazing! Quote:
“Go to sleep.” He sounded almost savage, did not look at her as he spoke. “Go to sleep, or I’ll hurt you, Weasley.”

This was by FAR the best chapter EVER!!!!!!
So intense... amazing Maxo!!!
Love,
~~Jay~~
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