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Originally Posted by
KellyBear 
Fortunately for Neville, Amycus seemed incapable of maintaining the Cruciatus Curse while punching, and he seemed unable to decide which he preferred, his fists or his wand.
That was a really cool way to start this post
I especially liked the part I bolded. Really cool.
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Originally Posted by Kellybear no relation to Teddy D. Bear but you wouldn't know it
Neville preferred the punches as the pain was focused and less intense, rather than all-consuming, even when Amycus drove the air from his lungs and cracked his ribs with his vicious blows to Neville’s stomach.
It's cool how tough Neville is. Amycus' cruelty goes without saying and it's to be expected of a Death Eater. Really cool. I love how canon your story seems and I don't really buy that whole fanfiction as plausible canon stuff because you know I think canon ceases to be when the original creator stops doing the work or deviates so far from what was (i.e. jumping the shark like say ... Grey's Anatomy) that it's just not the same story. Yours though feels authentic is what I guess I'm trying to say. Yup yup.
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Originally Posted by Genghis Kelly
so Neville concentrated all his will on remaining absolutely still throughout the ordeal for fear of the chains cutting through his flesh and crushing his bones.
Wow. You really are cruel. *takes notes*
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Originally Posted by Caesar Kellyus Ursa Emperor of Rome
Amycus taunted Neville continuously, but though Neville could hear his voice, it was as the cawing of a raven or the whispering of the wind.
I loved your description there, the whole description of him as an animal or an element not something rational or thinking like a human being. Nice way to dehumanize the enemy Kelly. I see you've been taking cues from the media
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Originally Posted by Kellybear Cobra Commander
He knew they were frightened of the D.A. and the possibility of a student uprising, and that knowledge gave him strength to endure the endless torture.
A student uprising. Now wouldn't that be fun?
Well, not for the Death Eaters obviously. But for the rest of us ... jolly good show, wot?
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Originally Posted by Gettin' Sweet Lovin' for Christmas and early Kellybear
You know it's Halloween soon, right?
I ♥ black cats ...