"Connie It only makes sense and it worked brilliantly in the plot, too"
Yes, you are exactly right!
I think, if I can say my opinion, that Neville needs a girl like Hanna. Someone with both feet on the ground. I love Luna, but I think Neville would be spending all his time trying to figure out what she was talking about and never move onto candy and flowers. Just my opinion though, I'll be happy with whatever you decide, your a great artist the way you put your story together. Post when you can.