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She was supposed to be planning a raid on the Potions storeroom but instead she was staring at a photograph of a smiling boy with unruly black hair. Her own long hair fell in a curtain to hide her face so that even if anyone had pulled back her bed hangings, they would not see the look of desperate longing upon her face.
This is Ginny right? Poor thing ...
I always hated that she and Harry broke up in book 6 and that ... well, just things ... you know? But, the course of true love never did run straight ... or something to that effect.
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KellyBear How long was she supposed to pretend that she did not crave him like oxygen? Or that her every waking moment was not dominated by thoughts of him, and her every dream haunted by his memory?
Wow. She's really in love with him, isn't she? To be apart from the one you love ... there's no greater sacrifice I suppose, or pain.
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KellyBear Come back to me, whispered her heart and the silent plea echoed through her mind until morning.
That part right there, really hurt. Like ouch. I want to beat the carp out of Harry right now ... poor Gin. You wrote that beautifully, btw.
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KellyBear "Mm, but you are still brilliant." he whispered against her temple.
Ginny smiled up at him, but her eyes were full of sorrow and she shook her head.
"No, if I were brilliant, I would be with you still. I would have found a way." she said sadly.
Poor Ginny. Seriously, could you lay off ... the angst of separation is clearly here. You write it very well. Poor Ginny. At least she has him in her dreams I suppose.
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Severus Snape sat behind his desk, fingers steepled beneath his hooked nose.
I always imagine him like that seriously. :simm:
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Things were moving very quickly now. He did not know how much longer he had. The last thing he needed was silly distractions.
Interesting ... what's old Snivelly up too, no?
J/k I love Snape now.
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"Wha..Dean?" Seamus said groggily.
No comment.
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KellyBear and Neville did the only thing he could think of. Pulling his wand out of his robes, he smacked Seamus hard on the head, and watched as he slowly vanished out of sight, then performed the Disillusionment Charm on himself as well.
They can make themselves invisible? But ... wouldn't that cease to necessitate the use of an invisibility cloak? Just a thought but poor Seamus *kisses his head* Neville was just too harsh on the boy and why didn't Dean send them off?
Neways, still loving your story ... and I see you've posted so ... I'm hurrying, I'm hurrying I'll be caught up soon ...