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OtterySt.Catchpole · 09-21-2009, 10:57 PM

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Originally Posted by KellyBear

Neville looked around the room at the faces turned toward him expectantly.

Boy have I been there ...

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Originally Posted by Kelly "I love ♥ Wall-e" Bear

They were haggard, careworn, their eyes haunted. Some of them bore the marks of the Carrows' cruelty. Hannah Abbott's left eye was swollen shut. A long gash ran the length of Anthony Goldstein's right cheek. The cut across Seamus Finnigan's forehead was just beginning to heal.

I love that you're writing bout this time period I don't think that people really write about this often and it kind of goes unnoticed what with Harry's antics and saving the whole wizarding world. *shrugs* But Neville was heroic too, and I love that this whole fic will be dedicated to his and the other DA members actions ... go Neville save the day or at least makes Carrow's and Snape regret it ... well not Snape so much because of what we know but ...

well Dumbledore really did know what he was doing didn't he? I wonder what the other teachers thought about him as Headmaster ... did they think he betrayed Dumbledore or ... I don' know ... did they think him a traitor in spite of everything ...

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Originally Posted by Kellybear my love

The Death Eaters walk our hallways. Dementors patrol our boundaries. Snape has been made Headmaster," Neville said contemptuously, "The days of practice are over, it is time to put to use what we have learned. It is time to fight back."

You go Neville, why don't you have a smile you courageous person you ... *runningglompslovesNeville*

I love your story everyday and you should keep posting so I don't spam your fic and I can keep telling you how wonderful you are. I think you should use more contractions though, the speeches sound a bit stilted when they're perfect no one says we will ... at least not alla time, we'll works for me ... or I'll not I will ... every now and then ... and that's just a friendly suggestion not necessary.

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Originally Posted by KellyBear the author of this fic

"I will fight with you, Neville." said Luna, smiling serenely at him as though he'd suggested a picnic by the lake.

This is a case in point ...

but just the same it doesn't surprise me that Luna would volunteer so easily and eagerly. N/L is love ♥ ... whatever may be cannon.

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Originally Posted by The lovely and indomnitable KellyBear

"Good. There are only a few of us, so our best bet is to work in small groups of two or three. Open warfare would be suicide, I think we can all agree on that, so we'll have to use stealth, keep them guessing whose doing what."

Seriously kewl. I love how Neville becomes a tactician and how they're going to use guerrilla tactics to fight. I think that the trio always kind of overshadowed Neville and with their absence and the absence of Draco who always put him down ... it was only right that it be his time to shine and not surprisingly against his greatest fear Professor Snape.

I remember these things.

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09-21-2009, 10:57 PM	#92 (permalink)
OtterySt.Catchpole SS Featured Artist DA Poet Rupert is My Man! SS100 Triumphant Aethonan Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: The Wicked House Posts: 18,909 Hogwarts RPG Name: Ottery St. Catchpole Gryffindor Third Year	Wall-e has a soul that is why he can love ♥ he's not just a machine cries Paris & Kellybear r luv :Read Otty 's fics:Gone With the Wind:I♥Rupert Quote: Originally Posted by KellyBear Neville looked around the room at the faces turned toward him expectantly. Boy have I been there ... Quote: Originally Posted by Kelly "I love ♥ Wall-e" Bear They were haggard, careworn, their eyes haunted. Some of them bore the marks of the Carrows' cruelty. Hannah Abbott's left eye was swollen shut. A long gash ran the length of Anthony Goldstein's right cheek. The cut across Seamus Finnigan's forehead was just beginning to heal. I love that you're writing bout this time period I don't think that people really write about this often and it kind of goes unnoticed what with Harry's antics and saving the whole wizarding world. shrugs But Neville was heroic too, and I love that this whole fic will be dedicated to his and the other DA members actions ... go Neville save the day or at least makes Carrow's and Snape regret it ... well not Snape so much because of what we know but ... well Dumbledore really did know what he was doing didn't he? I wonder what the other teachers thought about him as Headmaster ... did they think he betrayed Dumbledore or ... I don' know ... did they think him a traitor in spite of everything ... Quote: Originally Posted by Kellybear my love The Death Eaters walk our hallways. Dementors patrol our boundaries. Snape has been made Headmaster," Neville said contemptuously, "The days of practice are over, it is time to put to use what we have learned. It is time to fight back." You go Neville, why don't you have a smile you courageous person you ... runningglompslovesNeville I love your story everyday and you should keep posting so I don't spam your fic and I can keep telling you how wonderful you are. I think you should use more contractions though, the speeches sound a bit stilted when they're perfect no one says we will ... at least not alla time, we'll works for me ... or I'll not I will ... every now and then ... and that's just a friendly suggestion not necessary. Quote: Originally Posted by KellyBear the author of this fic "I will fight with you, Neville." said Luna, smiling serenely at him as though he'd suggested a picnic by the lake. This is a case in point ... but just the same it doesn't surprise me that Luna would volunteer so easily and eagerly. N/L is love ♥ ... whatever may be cannon. Quote: Originally Posted by The lovely and indomnitable KellyBear "Good. There are only a few of us, so our best bet is to work in small groups of two or three. Open warfare would be suicide, I think we can all agree on that, so we'll have to use stealth, keep them guessing whose doing what." Seriously kewl. I love how Neville becomes a tactician and how they're going to use guerrilla tactics to fight. I think that the trio always kind of overshadowed Neville and with their absence and the absence of Draco who always put him down ... it was only right that it be his time to shine and not surprisingly against his greatest fear Professor Snape. I remember these things. Pams Pams Pams Pams Pams Pams Pams please ... __________________