Tegz, you're such an amazing writer! I always knew that, though, from reading your roleplay posts. Seeing you write in story form just put it into perspective.

I like the way you really took the time to describe things in great detail, like the fold in the shoes and saying the higher heels had "a sneer." You did exceptionally well with those parts. Secretarty was pretty funny, too!

Well done! I can't wait for more!