07-28-2009, 09:46 PM
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 SS 100 Triumphant
DIMCPuffskein
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Over the Rainbow.
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Harvey Jarvis
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Aww brilliant insight on Teddy's character here, really well done! Well written, good dialogue and description... I really like how Harry takes is job as godfather seriously 
Anyway, I think longer chapters are good, myself 
Post more soon!
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