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Old 05-30-2009, 01:51 PM   #261 (permalink)
lilly_luna
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LOL its all good i read it again a few times and i got it, i just had to read it as one uninterupted chapter... the breaks in convo had me wondering who was saying what but i know now hehe they going down into the chamber to fight another Basalisk and Ginnys down there its all good, only one thing though could you be a bit clearer in who says what, thanks love

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