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Mistress Vondella · 03-05-2009, 06:45 AM

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Originally Posted by PhoenixRising

Dominic nodded again not wanting to argue with him. Of course he wasn't alright; any plain old muggle could have seen that even! But now wasn't really the time to say otherwise.

"Well, not really as good as Shakespeare," Dominic replied sheepishly, pulling the parchment from his pocket. "But well, here goes . . .

When disgraced in the eyes of Kaz
And beneath my bravery I weep,
With deaf ears and my tearless cries,
And looking up to the dias, curse my sleep;

To wish upon me one more chance,
Featuring all whom make least,
Desire in us all to dance,
With that let us contend with deist

Yet these thoughts, I find myself despising,
How I think with glee and then to you,
Like climbing these endless stairs and always arising,
But from the clouds to the grounds, and then the loo

For no matter how much pride or wealth I bring,
That I scorn to be as half as worthy as you kings."

Once he was finished, Dominic waited again to see what this professor would say in regards to his reading.

Eddie listened with pondering thoughts and focused very hard to pay attention. When the sonnet was completed, he sat back and pondered some more. Adults pondered before speaking. Always. "That was very good, Dom. Quite a few big words, I'm impressed you not only knew them but knew how to use them. Very well done indeed." Adults gave compliments, they also would critique, but sonnet writing was not his expertise.

"I did not know you were watching us so," even more reason for him to be grown-up here, "and it serves as a reminder that we are an example to you all. I thank you." He also got a great idea to help keep him up as an example. It would work too. He was sure of it. Where was that bullwhip? Or his wand, he needed his wand for his solar system.

"You know, you could start now. You're a prefect, a role model. Why not help your fellow students? I'm sure they would love to have a role model like you." He encouraged the....lad? Just then an owl dropped a class worth of homework on his head. He made a funny face, "and I must get back to work," he said as he jumped off his desk and walked around behind and sat in his comfy chair. Yes, nice and comfy.

03-05-2009, 06:45 AM	#61 (permalink)
Mistress Vondella Cockatrice Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 28,938 Hogwarts RPG Name: Professor McFarlane Graduated	IndyEddie Quote: Originally Posted by PhoenixRising Dominic nodded again not wanting to argue with him. Of course he wasn't alright; any plain old muggle could have seen that even! But now wasn't really the time to say otherwise. "Well, not really as good as Shakespeare," Dominic replied sheepishly, pulling the parchment from his pocket. "But well, here goes . . . When disgraced in the eyes of Kaz And beneath my bravery I weep, With deaf ears and my tearless cries, And looking up to the dias, curse my sleep; To wish upon me one more chance, Featuring all whom make least, Desire in us all to dance, With that let us contend with deist Yet these thoughts, I find myself despising, How I think with glee and then to you, Like climbing these endless stairs and always arising, But from the clouds to the grounds, and then the loo For no matter how much pride or wealth I bring, That I scorn to be as half as worthy as you kings." Once he was finished, Dominic waited again to see what this professor would say in regards to his reading. Eddie listened with pondering thoughts and focused very hard to pay attention. When the sonnet was completed, he sat back and pondered some more. Adults pondered before speaking. Always. "That was very good, Dom. Quite a few big words, I'm impressed you not only knew them but knew how to use them. Very well done indeed." Adults gave compliments, they also would critique, but sonnet writing was not his expertise. "I did not know you were watching us so," even more reason for him to be grown-up here, "and it serves as a reminder that we are an example to you all. I thank you." He also got a great idea to help keep him up as an example. It would work too. He was sure of it. Where was that bullwhip? Or his wand, he needed his wand for his solar system. "You know, you could start now. You're a prefect, a role model. Why not help your fellow students? I'm sure they would love to have a role model like you." He encouraged the....lad? Just then an owl dropped a class worth of homework on his head. He made a funny face, "and I must get back to work," he said as he jumped off his desk and walked around behind and sat in his comfy chair. Yes, nice and comfy. __________________ We'll always be together cuz we're both under the moon