Thread: HPRP: Anesthetic Delirium
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Old 06-21-2008, 11:32 PM   #6 (permalink)
RebbzSchafer
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Crystal (Crys) Thorns





RP sample:

So she ran. She ran as fast as her legs could carry her through the freezing cold snow, not knowing where she would go or how she would get there, all she knew was that she desperately needed to get away. Her left cheek was burning red with pain, complimentary of Carlos's right hand.
Through the cold evening mist she could hear someone crying out..
'Crystal ! Crystal, I'm sorry ! Crystal, come back !'
But, no, she wouldn't come back. Not this time. She was going away for good.

Her heart was beating so fast in her chest she could hardly hear her own thoughts. All she could hear were faint murmurs, states of obvious facts, not worth listening to...
'He is such a jerk !'
'He never treated me right..'
'You need a place to stay !'
She felt like her aching legs were breaking down beneath her, but she kept on going relentlessly, she had to get as far away as she possibly could. She knew of one place where she would feel comfortable, feel safe. It was her only option, but she was afraid. Afraid of what might happen if she showed up at their door at the middle of the night after all that she said to them when they last spoke. But there was no alternative, so she kept running, not looking back once, she knew there was nothing there for her.

But soon she had to stop. Her legs were too tired to carry her body weight and every breath stung her lungs like a frozen knife. She broke down in the middle of a park. She had been so focused on running she had simply forgotten to cry. But now she could. Hot tears started flowing down her ice bitten face. Kneeling on the ground, she sobbed and sobbed. The snow didn't melt from underneath her since her body was so cold already, it just made her colder and colder, leaving her skin raw and red, but she didn't care. She had become numb to everything, everything except to Carlos and what he had done to her.

'Are you alright, love ?'
Crys felt a warm hand an her shoulder and looked up. Just then she realized how far she had come. When she looked around she saw the swings she used to enjoy when she was younger. Everything was familiar, even the face she was looking up at.
'Crystal ? Is that you ?'
'Yes...' Crystal croaked and swiped a multi colored lock of hair from her wet face. 'Mom ?' She said and tried to get up, but the exhaustion overtook her and she fell to the ground again, and started crying even harder.
'What happened to you, sweetheart ? Richard ! It's Crystal ! Come out and help me carry her inside !' The woman called into direction of the small cottage they were outside of.
'Crystal, sweetie ? Your father and I are going to carry you into the house now, you can get cleaned up and have a nice, hot bath, okay ?'
Crystal's mother stroked her hair affectionately as a man knelt down by their side.
'Mhm... and Mom ? I'm sorry about what I said, I really didn't mean it..'
'Ssh, Crys, that doesn't matter, all forgotten, just save your energy...' The man said and picked her carefully up.
Thank you, Daddy, I really love you guys...' Crystal said and fell asleep in her father's arms.


Oh, and I'm new to the advanced RPG, so, don't be too harsh on me, please ? ^^

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