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griffin_girl · 01-12-2008, 02:30 AM

*new reader over here too*

LOVE THIS!

I love how you portray Neville here becaus in DH he did seem a lot braver. And to actually come up with this is wow. I can actually see Neville doing this. Taking charge of everyone, being a true Longbottom, making his parents proud. Go Neville!

Ah, same old Luna. you can always count on her. I love how you made her all mellow like she always is. [sometimes she reminds me of a hippie coz she's just so dang mellow!xD]

And Ginny. Ginny was always a listener and I love how you put her in-character here too. Actually, you put everybody in character.

I can't wait to read more!

01-12-2008, 02:30 AM	#11 (permalink)
griffin_girl Veela Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: In a fairytale Posts: 37,061 Hogwarts RPG Name: Jillian McGuffin Sixth Year	Gryffindor Goddess new reader over here too LOVE THIS! I love how you portray Neville here becaus in DH he did seem a lot braver. And to actually come up with this is wow. I can actually see Neville doing this. Taking charge of everyone, being a true Longbottom, making his parents proud. Go Neville! Ah, same old Luna. you can always count on her. I love how you made her all mellow like she always is. [sometimes she reminds me of a hippie coz she's just so dang mellow!xD] And Ginny. Ginny was always a listener and I love how you put her in-character here too. Actually, you put everybody in character. I can't wait to read more! __________________ And.I.try.not.to.Dream.but.them.possible.Schemes, Swim.around,wanna.Drown.me.in.Synch.and.I,don't.know. xxxx how,to.Slow.it.down.my.Mind's.racing.from.chasing.Pirates. x Celandine x Daphne x Garret x Jillian x