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o.o.c - sorry, don't mean to be a grammer/spelling snob or anything but I just keep noticing this one little thing (mustang sally) - whenever you spell something like 'dramaticly' or something with 'ly' at the end in that kind of form, it should be 'dramatically' (or any other word you use 'ly' for when it's a word... like dramatically). It might not be how you pronounce it, but that's how it's spelled.
Again, not meaning to be rude but I just kept noticing the same mistake and... well I just couldn't help but say something. You don't have to listen to me if you don't want to of course, but it's just so you know kind of thing.
occ. Opps

sorry! Ill try to remember form now on
Jack smiled as the rum was place in front of him. He took a great gulp before he continued with his food. Will rolled his eyes and kept eating.
"So how long do you think we will be staying here?" he said.
This place was nice, but he missed the sea.