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Hollister · 06-06-2007, 07:45 PM

Hello
I'm Hollie and this is my 1st FF! Although I do have anf FF which I write with Tara (DanIsMyMan). So this is my 1st FF that I have wrote myself!

In this FF I have two characters that I have made up myself, so they are mine, not J.K Rowling's, but everything else which is to do with Harry Potter is J.K's

The main character is Alice Moore:

and a ... Sub main character is Hayley Hunter:

Summary: When the stunningly beautiful Alice Moore arrives at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry, she becomes attracted towards a fellow Slytherin. She finds him really attractive but, also thirsts for his blood, even though she can control her thirst. This boy also likes Alice and would do anything to be with her. But he still in love with his best friend, who is also a beautiful girl. This boy has overwhelemed Alice so much, that it might just be impossible to keep self control for much longer ...

NOTE: I am reading Twilight at the moment so that is where I found some idea's from. I'm not copying, I promise!

I prefer being home schooled. It sounds much nicer than going to a school where there are other children there. I've never been around other children before, no one my age anyway.

Mother seemed to be good at home schooling me. But I couldn't see her teaching loads of other troublesome hormone loaded teens. In fact, I couldn't picture a school anyway. So what was the point in picturing my mother there?
I tossed and turned in my bed trying to get some sleep, but all I could think about was tomorrow. Tomorrow I shall be going to Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry. I didn't want to go, and I had three reasons as to why:
1. I get angry at people and things easily.
2. People tend to stare at me as if I'm weird, I don't think I'm weird.
and 3. I'm a Vampire, I thirst for blood, although I can control myself. So that isn't the largest problem.
Being a vampire you get freebies, most of them bad. Like I'm very pale. Even if I sun bathe for hours, which I would highly doubt seen as though I'm not too keen on the sun. I'm also very fast. Which I think, is a not bad freebie.

I had lost track of time. It was 7 o'clock in the morning.
"Alice! I'm not calling you down again, Hurry Up!" My mother screeched from the bottom of the stairs. I decided to ignore her and got out of bed. I stumbled to the window, and looked at the scenery, there was no scenery. Fog.
That was fine.

I got dressed and walked down the stairs, into the dining room where mother was reading the newspaper. While I started eating my breakfast, I remembered something terrible about this school. There were houses. I was sorted into Slytherin.
"How typical" I had said to mother once the private sorting was over. Ravenclaw sounded nice. But I, being what I am, ended up in the 'Sly', 'Evil' and 'cunning' house.
"You ready?" My mum asked after breakfast.
We apparated to platform 9 3/4. There were so many students. My stomach felt like it had turned upside down and my heart was racing.
I could smell them. All of them. It was lucky I could control myself, otherwise everyone would have been dead with teeth marks on their neck in a second.
I noticed the large red train at the corner of my eye and I turned to face it. It was beautiful. All my nerves had disappeared.
"Well .. I'll be seeing you then hunny" Mother weeped. I turned to her. She was wiping her tears with her jacket sleeve.
"I'll miss you" I said, giving her a hug. I was glad I could hold back my tears.
She finally let me go and I walked up to the train. A few people stopped and stared at me as I climbed in but I just ignored them.
Yeah, I'm pale. Get over it! I thought. So what if I looked like a freak, I'm not on the inside.

Hope you like!
Hollie xx

Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11

06-06-2007, 07:45 PM	#1 (permalink)
Hollister Romanian Longhorn Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Gatsby's. Posts: 39,219 Hogwarts RPG Name: Shannon 'Shan' Parker Fourth Year x2	Avid - Sa16+ JGL ♥ \| Wifey + SexyCPR = RAWR. \| Co-Inceptor♥ \| CHLOCHLO! \| Rollie = My Ship Hello I'm Hollie and this is my 1st FF! Although I do have anf FF which I write with Tara (DanIsMyMan). So this is my 1st FF that I have wrote myself! In this FF I have two characters that I have made up myself, so they are mine, not J.K Rowling's, but everything else which is to do with Harry Potter is J.K's The main character is Alice Moore: and a ... Sub main character is Hayley Hunter: Summary: When the stunningly beautiful Alice Moore arrives at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry, she becomes attracted towards a fellow Slytherin. She finds him really attractive but, also thirsts for his blood, even though she can control her thirst. This boy also likes Alice and would do anything to be with her. But he still in love with his best friend, who is also a beautiful girl. This boy has overwhelemed Alice so much, that it might just be impossible to keep self control for much longer ... NOTE: I am reading Twilight at the moment so that is where I found some idea's from. I'm not copying, I promise! I prefer being home schooled. It sounds much nicer than going to a school where there are other children there. I've never been around other children before, no one my age anyway. Mother seemed to be good at home schooling me. But I couldn't see her teaching loads of other troublesome hormone loaded teens. In fact, I couldn't picture a school anyway. So what was the point in picturing my mother there? I tossed and turned in my bed trying to get some sleep, but all I could think about was tomorrow. Tomorrow I shall be going to Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry. I didn't want to go, and I had three reasons as to why: 1. I get angry at people and things easily. 2. People tend to stare at me as if I'm weird, I don't think I'm weird. and 3. I'm a Vampire, I thirst for blood, although I can control myself. So that isn't the largest problem. Being a vampire you get freebies, most of them bad. Like I'm very pale. Even if I sun bathe for hours, which I would highly doubt seen as though I'm not too keen on the sun. I'm also very fast. Which I think, is a not bad freebie. I had lost track of time. It was 7 o'clock in the morning. "Alice! I'm not calling you down again, Hurry Up!" My mother screeched from the bottom of the stairs. I decided to ignore her and got out of bed. I stumbled to the window, and looked at the scenery, there was no scenery. Fog. That was fine. I got dressed and walked down the stairs, into the dining room where mother was reading the newspaper. While I started eating my breakfast, I remembered something terrible about this school. There were houses. I was sorted into Slytherin. "How typical" I had said to mother once the private sorting was over. Ravenclaw sounded nice. But I, being what I am, ended up in the 'Sly', 'Evil' and 'cunning' house. "You ready?" My mum asked after breakfast. We apparated to platform 9 3/4. There were so many students. My stomach felt like it had turned upside down and my heart was racing. I could smell them. All of them. It was lucky I could control myself, otherwise everyone would have been dead with teeth marks on their neck in a second. I noticed the large red train at the corner of my eye and I turned to face it. It was beautiful. All my nerves had disappeared. "Well .. I'll be seeing you then hunny" Mother weeped. I turned to her. She was wiping her tears with her jacket sleeve. "I'll miss you" I said, giving her a hug. I was glad I could hold back my tears. She finally let me go and I walked up to the train. A few people stopped and stared at me as I climbed in but I just ignored them. Yeah, I'm pale. Get over it! I thought. So what if I looked like a freak, I'm not on the inside. Hope you like! Hollie xx Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 Chapter 10 Chapter 11 Last edited by Ozzy; 09-19-2007 at 09:11 AM.