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Malmalfoy · 08-03-2005, 03:51 AM

I have three more poems to post here. I hope some people start to read them. I have a quote that I came up with:

So many broken hearts lay in the path of the past of my life. Will he be the one who doesn't spill another drop of ink on my precious parchment I call my path of destiny of life?

It's not really a quote but it came to me and I just had to put it here. But on with the posts.

I Ask You

I ask you
Did life treat you well?
Did it bring you love,
hope, happiness?
Though those are the good
things.
Did it also bring you a broken heart,
rejection and disappointment, sadness even?

I ask you
Did destiny happen the way it was
supposed to?
For I wouldn't know,
we've only just met.
All I want to know, will
all those things happen to me too?

Will I be blessed with a name that
will fit me?
A name that depicts who I am inside and out?
Will I know that God was right in choosing
the best parents for the job of raising me
until I am ready to go off and prove myself
to the world?

I ask you
Is walking and talking my first challenge?
They don't seem that hard.
Walking is only one foot in front of the other
and talking is moving my lips and making sure
sound comes out.
Yes. They don't seem hard at all.

How will things feel?
The sand in the sandbox
just flows through, between my fingers.
But as it does, should it make me feel
like it's all magical?
Is the air going to fly through my hair
as I go back and forth on the swing?

I ask you
Is it really good to share with others?
Will the things I learn be interesting?
I want to know everything.
Will the rest of the others I have to learn with
be nice?
Will they want to play with me?

As I grow up, will I have to experience things
that I really don't want to?
Will the pressure be so much that I will?
Will one of those experiences be love and a
broken heart?
Is it really apart of life?

I ask you
Will I have to grow up and get a job?
Can it be a job I like and can do?
Will I have kids of my own who look
like me?
Will it be fun watching them do what I used
to and become something they want?

Will old age get to me?
Is it going to be tough knowing
I'm going to die soon?
Will dieing be the next adventure?
Where will I go?
What will I do?

So I ask you one last
simple question:
Will life treat me good too?

That's about what a baby would be asking before it's being born. Like it's soul is still in heaven and is asking someone how life really is. I know weird but I thought it was good.

08-03-2005, 03:51 AM	#3 (permalink)
Malmalfoy Dementor Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: In an imaginery world full of magic. Posts: 97	I have three more poems to post here. I hope some people start to read them. I have a quote that I came up with: So many broken hearts lay in the path of the past of my life. Will he be the one who doesn't spill another drop of ink on my precious parchment I call my path of destiny of life? It's not really a quote but it came to me and I just had to put it here. But on with the posts. I Ask You I ask you Did life treat you well? Did it bring you love, hope, happiness? Though those are the good things. Did it also bring you a broken heart, rejection and disappointment, sadness even? I ask you Did destiny happen the way it was supposed to? For I wouldn't know, we've only just met. All I want to know, will all those things happen to me too? Will I be blessed with a name that will fit me? A name that depicts who I am inside and out? Will I know that God was right in choosing the best parents for the job of raising me until I am ready to go off and prove myself to the world? I ask you Is walking and talking my first challenge? They don't seem that hard. Walking is only one foot in front of the other and talking is moving my lips and making sure sound comes out. Yes. They don't seem hard at all. How will things feel? The sand in the sandbox just flows through, between my fingers. But as it does, should it make me feel like it's all magical? Is the air going to fly through my hair as I go back and forth on the swing? I ask you Is it really good to share with others? Will the things I learn be interesting? I want to know everything. Will the rest of the others I have to learn with be nice? Will they want to play with me? As I grow up, will I have to experience things that I really don't want to? Will the pressure be so much that I will? Will one of those experiences be love and a broken heart? Is it really apart of life? I ask you Will I have to grow up and get a job? Can it be a job I like and can do? Will I have kids of my own who look like me? Will it be fun watching them do what I used to and become something they want? Will old age get to me? Is it going to be tough knowing I'm going to die soon? Will dieing be the next adventure? Where will I go? What will I do? So I ask you one last simple question: Will life treat me good too? That's about what a baby would be asking before it's being born. Like it's soul is still in heaven and is asking someone how life really is. I know weird but I thought it was good.