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FireboltFreak · 07-13-2005, 12:35 AM

thanx SOOO much dude!
anyway... here's one I wrote 4 school in 5 grade

Once
Not twice
Not three times,
Just once
There was a time
There was a place
These things are not important
In this time there was a girl
The girl was always asleep
Stirring as she slept
Never once waking
Never once stepping out of her cage
Imprisoned
Without bars
Nothing holding herback
Nothing except herself
Then one day
She woke up

hmmm.... could be better in my oppinion, but I want it to stay the same as I wrote it.

07-13-2005, 12:35 AM	#9 (permalink)
FireboltFreak BeekaBeeka Firecrab Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 762 Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurora Mandich	thanx SOOO much dude! anyway... here's one I wrote 4 school in 5 grade Once Not twice Not three times, Just once There was a time There was a place These things are not important In this time there was a girl The girl was always asleep Stirring as she slept Never once waking Never once stepping out of her cage Imprisoned Without bars Nothing holding herback Nothing except herself Then one day She woke up hmmm.... could be better in my oppinion, but I want it to stay the same as I wrote it.