Thanks for your thoughts guys
I really appreciate it. Here is another poem I wrote for a friend who was dealing with the problem of never being able to see her boyfriend. Hope you like it
I watched the rain as it fell
Wishing that I was well
I haven’t seen you in a while
And I am beginning to think that I never will
I keep your picture on my desk
And under my pillow
And on my head rest
When I go to bed I pretend you’re there
Cause deep inside I know you care
But it’s just so hard never seeing you
Never knowing if it’s really true
I read the words on the screen
And wish that you could just be seen
That you could hold me deep at night
And tell me you love me with a kiss goodnight
But inside I know you’re trying hard
Cause I am too
It’s just so hard
But deep inside I know one day
We’ll see each other each and every day
So I promise you my darling dear
That I will love you with all my heart
And I would stand out in the rain
For hours on end
And I would die if you died to too
Cause I just can’t live without you
From this I write to my friend
Who has told me how much she wishes she could see you
Each and every day
And one day she will I always say
Cause I know deep inside
That if you’re right
Which you are
You’ll both survive.