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RandomRaven · 05-02-2012, 06:40 PM

You know Jess, when I read this chapter suddenly I remembered about my pathophysiology class and this week I'll have presentation about cancer too

Okay, that's was an intermezzo

as usual, your story is good, though sometimes I got confused with the words

~~maybe because I read it when it was blackout and It's already 1.30 am here?~~

BUT I like this chapter because you didn't put any uncommon medical term that might be confusing to the readers. Good job!

and Don't say that Ron will be a donor for Bone Marrow transplant!

~Raven chan

05-02-2012, 06:40 PM	#82 (permalink)
RandomRaven Pixie Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Nutella Jar (GMT+7) Posts: 44,768 Hogwarts RPG Name: Mikey Goh Fourth Year x7	BOOMBAYAH! \| #PuedoPorquePiensoQuePuedo \| Certified Blank and Random Person \| Raventastic You know Jess, when I read this chapter suddenly I remembered about my pathophysiology class and this week I'll have presentation about cancer too Okay, that's was an intermezzo as usual, your story is good, though sometimes I got confused with the words ~~maybe because I read it when it was blackout and It's already 1.30 am here?~~ BUT I like this chapter because you didn't put any uncommon medical term that might be confusing to the readers. Good job! and Don't say that Ron will be a donor for Bone Marrow transplant! ~Raven chan __________________ AT THE HOGWARTS YULE BALL, YOU'LL BE HANGING OUT WITH....__________________ It's a fairytale evening, and you want the entire event to be totally dazzling and a real experience with the friendliest people around you.