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sweetpinkpixie · 03-21-2012, 03:31 AM

Hello and welcome! Please be sure to edit your first post with a chapter index when you next update and, as always, update often and have fun!

Just a few comments to kick things off and to maybe keep in mind for future posts

Keep an eye on punctuation and spelling. For example, there are a few proper nouns and words after periods that are not capitalized. These little mistakes can be a distraction to the reader.
Yay for Draco's point of view! I always enjoy reading things from character's perspective and will be interested to see what you do with this. I'd like to see his reason for using muggleborn in his diary instead of mudblood - which we all know he always uses to refer to Hermione.

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sweetpinkpixie SSRPG Admin Gladrags Mod Quibbler Mod Minister for Magic Alley Proprietor Sea Serpent Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: The Paths Posts: 41,120 Hogwarts RPG Name: Professor Cox Ravenclaw Graduated Hogwarts RPG Name: Briallen Ashburry-Hawthorne Gryffindor Fourth Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Nyle Harden Hufflepuff Fifth Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Iris Harden Ravenclaw Fifth Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Calliope Barrington Slytherin Fourth Year Ministry Department Head: Charles Hollingberry Minister's Office Ministry Department Head: Airey Flamsteed Mysteries Diagon Alley Proprietor: Victor García Massey Ollivanders x12 x12	astronomizzle ♧ gryffinDORK \| & the rest is drag ♣ #badluckDerf Hello and welcome! Please be sure to edit your first post with a chapter index when you next update and, as always, update often and have fun! Just a few comments to kick things off and to maybe keep in mind for future posts Keep an eye on punctuation and spelling. For example, there are a few proper nouns and words after periods that are not capitalized. These little mistakes can be a distraction to the reader. Yay for Draco's point of view! I always enjoy reading things from character's perspective and will be interested to see what you do with this. I'd like to see his reason for using muggleborn in his diary instead of mudblood - which we all know he always uses to refer to Hermione. __________________ We broke into a million pieces, and we can't go back......................................... But now we're seeing all the beauty in the broken glass..................................... The scars are part of me, darkness and harmony My voice without the lies, this is what it sounds like