Hey!
Great job! It's very good and gives a good look into Narcissa.
I've always wondered about Narcissa and have always felt sorry for her. She was always my favorite Malfoy (aside from Draco ), especially in the movies. Your post makes me wonder (as have the books) if Lucius and her actually loved each other or just the arrangement of 2 good pureblood families.
Very, very good job!!
-Rachel