Hey Jazz, wow what a chapter! The way you write makes me wish I was there in person. Love this part;
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Izabella smiled after her for a moment; Ruby was one of the few girls she had remained close to from her year. She also didn't mind when Izabella spent time with Lily.
I like Ruby also. So now we have a trio for that time era. The IRS; Izabella, Ruby, and Scott.
I'm glad she has friends who except her, as is.
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“I hear you had a rather eventful summer Miss Prince.”
Dumbledore, the all knowing.
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“Very well. I have set up a group of people who are fighting Voldemort-”
Arggg! I'm so curious what he was going to say!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Maybe that Sirius, James, and Lily are in this gtoup of people, and they will be telling her things about Lucius that she won't want to hear. And that he is there to help her if she needs it.
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She paused outside of the common room entrance, her head resting against the wall as she chewed on her lip. This year was going to be harder than she had orignally thought. She sighed heavily then entered the dark, green common room.
You always end your chapters in a way that makes me feel the same way your character is feeling. I like that.
Great writing Jazz. I'll be waiting for your next chapter. Take care of yourself this term, but enjoy it too.
