Brill, girlfriend, as usual!
Ooooh, the mysterious necklace, the silver key....what secrets do they hold? What might their hidden meanings be?
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Severus... a name that was not often said with such kindness. He offered Ellouise a genuine smile, it may have been crooked and the light may not have reached his eyes, but that was the best he could do. The muscles in his cheeks burned with the effort of contracting.
Oh how beautifully you wrote this! OMG, how could anyone read that and NOT fall in love with Snape?
Oh, and love the way Snape describes the Marauder boys: "the mutt and his sidekick", "Remus- the lesser of all evils" Hahahahahahaha!
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He stopped briefly, to catch his breath, fearful that he might pass out if he deprived himself of oxygen any longer. Even after years of holding his breath around her, he could still remember her sweet scent, the intoxicating fumes of honey and mixed berries with a hint of spicy cinnamon ... heaven.
OH, Snape and Lily!!! Too often, his love for Lily is just a piece of backstory, an afterthought even. Nobody focuses on it; that's why it's so refreshing and heart-wrenching to read what you write. His feelings are still so fresh, his regret and adoration and despair... oh my heart was squeezed so tightly!!!
PAMS for the love of God!!!!!
