Back again!

Sorry for my turtle paste at reading. I really like the direction your story is taking... Ellouise plotting to find her parents, the family heir loom found in the box, how the box couldn't open like horcruxes... It's all very interesting. And the most thing that I liked about your last posts was how you described Snape. You searched deeper within his character and gave him a justified reason behind his behaviour by describing his emotions, especially towards James and Sirius. I loved all the vivid descriptions you provided in your writing. As someone else has already mentioned, it's one of those stories that you can imagine yourself being in the setting with the characters. This ff is well worthy of a win so people should vote vote vote for the Golden Goblin Awards!

I'll promise to stay updated on your story's progress more often than before.