Hey Heather. You seriously did not stop there on purpose right?!?!?!?!???!?
Tremendous chapter Heather. I enjoyed the whole chapter, even the bits I knew what was going on like when Draco was talking into his sleeve and hand. But the thing is you encorporated it into your ff so well that it looked and felt original.
I also want to commend you on how real you made the event of studying and practicing for the next challenge for Harry.
This part made me catch my breath when I read the first line. I'm so afraid for Ella now!
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" How did you know?" Ella said chasing after him.
" How did you know, we had a tournament." " The only postings was in our common room." He started to walk faster. " Proffesor, there was jinx on the sheets,no teachers could see it.!"
Ella stopped and ran INthe opposite direction. She needed to find Snape fast
Please, please, please say you'll be able to post soon. Great work Heather. I'll be watching for your next chapter.